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I Do Not Fear

This is my statement of my life

5 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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Although I've already made that decision someone ago, it still needs to be said, where do you need to be st the final curtain. We need to walk in the shoes of Jesus, lest destruction awaits us, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It is good to stand up on our own two feet and not be afraid of being alone. I have known some strong and determined people in my life who have been courageous in the face of adversity, I try to be like them as we can only really rely on ourselves. I enjoyed your uplifting words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024

Comment from Jennifer L Newcomb
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I honestly am not sure, as the reader the meaning of what you are trying to convey. This is not a bad thing as it challenges the reader to think upon the words written, dissecting the writers meaning behind them. There are many roads to take without a map to follow and often we walk the path to our destination alone. All the while hoping the path and roads taken leads us to others that have gone the same way. Never having to be alone again.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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What a beautiful poem. The picture sets the tone for the poem. It flows nicely to completion. Do you have a background in English or is this something that comes naturally. Personally, I struggle and I have to wait until something hits me. I have several poems written, but some of them suck.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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You're fortunate not to fear being alone because it can be one of the biggest dreads of all for people. But, clearly, you're very strengthened by your faith and fortified by the path you're on. Thank you for sharing your inspiring message in your excellent free verse. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024