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Salvation

A short poem of reassuring faith.

36 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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This is simple and sweet and perfect for a child to learn and repeat. It helps to remember Who it is Who saves us. So much of the world tries to get us to look for solutions away from the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your kind and supportive words About the poem. Thank you for the best wishes regarding the contest.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Beautifully succinct yet so rich in truth and testimony, Z -- what's not to love (and 'high five' and 'thumbs up' here?! ;) Thanx so much for sharing, sir, and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Thanks Yvette for the positive words. I have never been much on writing L O N G stuff. I tell my story and move on. Thanks for the good luck wish. I think the "committee" likes long stuff.

    Z
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the words you used and also the rhymes. We really need faith today in our world. It what keeps us strong. Great job.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Brenda. I appreciate your positive and meaningful remarks about the content of the poem. Faith in the God who created us is lacking in this world.
    Robert
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you for this short but beautifully written and illustrated poem of your salvation, dear Z. A much needed inspiration for these troubling times.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :))

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Hello Sal.
    Thank you very much for your uplifting and positive review. Faith is a simple process, but sometimes, we try to make things harder. Thank you for the good wishes in the contest.
    I was a fan of yours for the time I was here before. I have seen no notices in my message box about your writing. I guess my fan files don't work now. I will go back today and "refan" you, so I will see your work.
    Z
Comment from Janet Foor
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Short, sweet and to the point. I love it. Your faith comes shining through in your words and the artwork is perfect Robert. It truly is a short poem of reassuring faith.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Hello Janet. Thank you for your supportive words. Faith is the assurance of what we hope for and the certainty of what we do not see. [Hebrews 11:1]. I rely upon this verse every day.
    Robert
Comment from Wendy G
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Very well expressed. His promises will all be fulfilled, including our salvation thrrogh faith in His Son, Jesus our Lord. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your positive review and comments. I agree with your words and thoughts. Sometimes simplicity is good.
Comment from bob cullen
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Sorry, I don't have a six because this deserves one. Your four lines certainly sum up every lesson we ever learned in scripture, or religion class. Life truly is that simple, practice what the bible teaches.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Bob. I appreciate your great words and certainly agree with the totality of your comments. Sometimes, simplicity can be a way to see things.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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short succinct statement of faith in God and his promises of eternal life to those who believe. Your faith shines through the poem. Although I don't share your faith, I can appreciate the sentiment,

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
    Hello Jake.
    Thank you for your positive review of the poem. I am pleased the message of the work was apparent to you. I appreciate your comments and thank you for taking the time.
    Robert
Comment from Shanbreen
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Short, but well written. It gets the point across. I am glad you have found salvation by reassuring your faith. Thanks for sharing and all the best for the 'My Faith Poetry' contest.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for this positive and uplifting review and comments. I also thank you for the best wishes in the contest. The poem is certainly a statement of my faith.
    Robert
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Robert, this is a short poem, but it's concise and to the point. It shows very clearly what is is your faith and how you feel about it. It's a great entry. All the best of luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
    Hey Ulla.
    I hope you are doing well. It has been a long time, but it is good to hear from you again. Thank you for your positive words about the content. It is exactly what I believe and it was easy to write. Thank you for your good luck wishes.
    Robert