Memories of the Past
for the contest Chamber of Horrors3 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
I like this story. You did a great job describing the room and you brought to life the smells. I could almost imagine those smells while reading the story. Even though you don't have characters you brought this story to completion.
I did find one small error:
The old smells the room carried made you think like something died not long(,) a-did you mean long ago.
Good luck on the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I like this story. You did a great job describing the room and you brought to life the smells. I could almost imagine those smells while reading the story. Even though you don't have characters you brought this story to completion.
I did find one small error:
The old smells the room carried made you think like something died not long(,) a-did you mean long ago.
Good luck on the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I didn't even come in 3rd place. But I did just win first place in a different contest so I'm good...
thanks for the kind review....
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Well I'm sorry you didn't place in the contest. You won first place in another one though. That's fantastic.
Cecilia
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I agree you can't win them all and it wouldn't be fun if you did....
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This is true. Someday I hope to be in that boat.
Cecilia
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have fun until you do...
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have fun until you do...
I will
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, what a haunting read! You do a great job of immersing us into the eerie atmosphere of the room. I felt the chilling tension with every detail. The image of the bloody sheets and the knife is just chilling. The little touches like the spider's web worked so well. Fantastic writing!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Wow, what a haunting read! You do a great job of immersing us into the eerie atmosphere of the room. I felt the chilling tension with every detail. The image of the bloody sheets and the knife is just chilling. The little touches like the spider's web worked so well. Fantastic writing!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you...I appriciate the time it took you to read and make a comment.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well this room has seen some depravity in its time and I am not sure I would want to enter this space as it sounds so scary with all that evidence within. A crime scene operative would have a field day with all this, a fine post for the contest, you certainly gave me the chills, love Dolly x x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Well this room has seen some depravity in its time and I am not sure I would want to enter this space as it sounds so scary with all that evidence within. A crime scene operative would have a field day with all this, a fine post for the contest, you certainly gave me the chills, love Dolly x x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you. I wanted to see how well I could discribe something so I decided to give the contest a try. Good practice...