His Silence
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Oliver certainly does have a different attitude toward Noah than he had in the pages of the diary. When he slams out of the annex and into the house, it seems rather threatening to someone, hopefully not Callum.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Oliver certainly does have a different attitude toward Noah than he had in the pages of the diary. When he slams out of the annex and into the house, it seems rather threatening to someone, hopefully not Callum.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my gosh, I love the way this chapter evolved. First, we see the attitude Noah had from her mother's perspective. Something changed that! Funny her mother used the name Grace for her, but changed it later. Gotta wonder what happened.
Then, the exciting and mysterious ending.
Well written,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Oh my gosh, I love the way this chapter evolved. First, we see the attitude Noah had from her mother's perspective. Something changed that! Funny her mother used the name Grace for her, but changed it later. Gotta wonder what happened.
Then, the exciting and mysterious ending.
Well written,
Rhonda
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you Rhonda, her name was actually changed when she was adopted. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Teri7
Jacob, This is a very interesting chapter. You used very good descriptive words. I am going to have to go back and read back further. Thanks for sharing. Teri
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Jacob, This is a very interesting chapter. You used very good descriptive words. I am going to have to go back and read back further. Thanks for sharing. Teri
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Teri, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
The police maybe? that would be nice if someone would wise up around that place. LOl Can't wait to see what has set Oliver off this time. Great job, Jacob.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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The police maybe? that would be nice if someone would wise up around that place. LOl Can't wait to see what has set Oliver off this time. Great job, Jacob.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoy you little cliff hangers where something happens we can wonder about until you post again. It seems Dainielle is skimming through the Diary and just reading bits and pieces. Maybe she can still find some information in it.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I enjoy you little cliff hangers where something happens we can wonder about until you post again. It seems Dainielle is skimming through the Diary and just reading bits and pieces. Maybe she can still find some information in it.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a poignant read after all the drama that's been going on. Danielle has a chance to reflect in peace and start trying to pull the strands together. Only by looking back on the past can she find some kind of resolution. And yet Oliver's mantra is always to let go. It seems to be in his interest that people comply with his demand. An enjoyable chapter with skilful contrast, filling in a bit more information but still leaving a lot of gaps in this mystery. Take care Jacob. Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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This is a poignant read after all the drama that's been going on. Danielle has a chance to reflect in peace and start trying to pull the strands together. Only by looking back on the past can she find some kind of resolution. And yet Oliver's mantra is always to let go. It seems to be in his interest that people comply with his demand. An enjoyable chapter with skilful contrast, filling in a bit more information but still leaving a lot of gaps in this mystery. Take care Jacob. Debbie
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, why is Oliver so upset. Is it information about Noah? Are the police onto to something. Or did he find out that Max is asking questions again. I'd really like to know. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Yes, why is Oliver so upset. Is it information about Noah? Are the police onto to something. Or did he find out that Max is asking questions again. I'd really like to know. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jacob,
Another great read. I always enjoy your chapters. You are brilliant in the fact that you leave your readers hanging on the edge for more.
I did find one small typo:
know I'll have my hands{ fall }. when Grace arrives, but I'm getting sick - I believe this word should be {full}.
Great job. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Jacob,
Another great read. I always enjoy your chapters. You are brilliant in the fact that you leave your readers hanging on the edge for more.
I did find one small typo:
know I'll have my hands{ fall }. when Grace arrives, but I'm getting sick - I believe this word should be {full}.
Great job. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Cecilia
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia, and for spotting that typo, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome. You know I love your story
Cecilia