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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Eve has a good reason to be afraid. Her world seems to be tearing itself apart and she has no idea what she will do if her world breaks up. Danielle was wise to stay with Eve. It might be safer for both of them. What happens if someone has to use the bathroom during the night?

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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At least she's found a friend she can talk to who seems as unnerved by the goings-on and alone as her. maybe there's strength in numbers? An interesting development. Thanks for sharing another excellent chapter, Jacob. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm really curious what Eve is scared of. I thought she really liked it there. I am guessing Mary is really a spy. I do like this story.

I sit on the bed next to her. (on the bed beside her. 'next to' is for objects, 'beside' is for people,)

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Oh wow, a tender moment between Eve and Danielle. That was as unexpected as the lack of material possessions and getting locked in. Sounds like Oliver doesn't trust her much either. Now, I wonder if Danielle is going to get anymore information from her than she's been able to get from others?? Wait and see...

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 07-Nov-2024
    Always!
Comment from Begin Again
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Maybe Eve will be the one who cracks and gives Danielle some information that might help figure this out and get out of there, too. You're doing a good Jacob, and of course, I am enjoying the story. (Though I do get mad at them at times) LOL
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
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The place was probably peaceful until Danielle arrived, with Mary and Oliver dictating how they should all live in harmony. It was like they weren't allowed to think for themselves. If Eve is scared after having been kicked out of her house and having to live on the streets, I would imagine everyone would be feeling the tension.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Jacob,

Another fine chapter. You really have my curiosity up now. The plot thickens. I love it. You always leave me wanting more.

Great job. Keep them coming.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
    Thank you Cecillia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 07-Nov-2024
    Jacob,

    You know I love this book.

    Cecilia