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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Let's hope that Eve isn't bumped off before she can divulge exactly what she finds frightening. I fear that Danielle's going to become a nervous wreck if she stays there much longer. And what's happened to Max? D could do with some back-up because Callum's a bit useless:)) You cleverly maintain the creepiness of this place and suspense levels. Thanks for sharing, Jacob. Debbie

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Danielle is frightened by the idea of Mary working on Callum. What are they doing to him? Also, she wants Grace to tell her what she admitted she was afraid of, but Grace is too smart to talk in the kitchen where she might be overheard. Oliver's little colony is getting creepier by the day.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Jacob,

Another fine chapter under your book. I am so curious to know what's going on in this house. I suppose if I had read the book from the beginning I might have a better clue.

Anyway, you keep doing what you do best and keep writing that book. I am ever so curious to find out what all the secrecy is about.

Great Job

Cecilia

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Thank you Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 12-Nov-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from Begin Again
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Well, Eve might or might not be ready to share what she knows with Danielle, but on the other hand, what's Mary working on Callum about? And where is Oliver off to? So many questions. Good job, Jacob!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
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Danielle seems to always on edge. Oliver makes her nervous. She is worried about what Mary might be doing with Callum and what has make Eve afraid. So much has happened it makes it seem as though she has been here longer that she has. I know she wasn't learn more about why her parents were killed before she leaves. I think she has reason to be suspicious of everyone there.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Where is Mary and Callum and what is she trying to accomplish with him? What is Eve hiding? More and more questions but I do know Danielle and Callum need to get out of that house. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.