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At Home in Mississippi

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Growing up in the 40 and 50 in MIssissippi

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow! Now there was a whirlwind entry for this edition! ;) And I'm guessing the whole 'need to know' thing never changed... right? ;) Thanx so much for sharing, my lady -- as always, much enjoyed! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Yvette. The Need to know continued into our marriage. I sort of broke him for doing it to me, but I was the way he operated with others.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Yvette. The Need to know continued into our marriage. I sort of broke him for doing it to me, but I was the way he operated with others.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Beth,

What a great story. They did things so differently back in 1955. It was the time of ladies. It sounded like you had a full senior year with the trip and all the parties you went to.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Well, that's a lot of stuff to happen in one year holy smoke. I think it's uh, supremely well written. You have amazing grasp of language and a huge assortment of words to choose from a descriptive.I could play the movie in my head. Really good really well done! Thank you for this.Because the pleasure to read, I hope you have the most amazing!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

Comment from Jacob1395
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I think I would be slightly annoyed if my partner introduced me to their parents without informing me first, I haven't been in that position yet, but I can imagine it can be quite a scary moment first time. A well written piece, Beth, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

Comment from Wayne Fowler
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All the 'honor' parties surprised me.
Well written. I think the entire collection will make a fine book, very descriptive of the era and region in terms of growing up rural.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent chapter with good form and composition. Great character and plot development. I'm enjoying reading about your life. Good word imagery easy to visualize.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -  Atticus




he suggested (we a drive) south instead of north. *we take a drive?

I hadn't realized until I became (of senior,) *became a senior?

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Evan's parents seem elderly. I can just imagine you dressed in your finery Beth when you were young. I liked your last paragraph to give us a sense of timing here with those poignant events almost 70 years ago, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Dolly. His parents were about twenty years older than mine, but he did have a ten-year sister born while his mom was in menopause. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    Beth
Comment from lyenochka
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I can't believe he sprung that on you without any warning. I guess you loved him and knew you could adapt to his lack of communication ways. I'm glad you did the senior play and am sorry you were still plagued by that jealous rival for play roles!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Helen. I would have liked to have been prepared, but I didn't get too upset since they seemed nice. He did warn me when he wanted me to meet his sisters. Put me on your prayer list. I have shingles and not only external surface pain, burning and itching but deep burning pain in my back and shoulder that feel like nerve pain. It may be internal shingles as well. I can't sleep.
reply by lyenochka on 10-Dec-2024
    Oh no! Okay! Will be praying!
    I think we need to have people rotate the prayer chain here.
    Praying for you! I had shingles and know what it's like. 💖🙏
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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You draw me into your world. I was born into your world in August. I liked being born in 1955. I always used to say that I would never forget when I was born because I am like the speed limit. 1955. Then they changed the speed limit to 70 how rude of them. Good work here. Karen

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I want to move into Evans house myself. It sounds like perfection to me. I love hearing about all the beginnings taking place in 1955. I was born in 1956 and that was very interesting to me. Great chapter

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Marilyn. It wasn't a bad house, but I never got to live there because Evan job was in Jackson. I'm glad you like my story.
    Beth