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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from BethShelby
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Wow! that explains a lot. It may be making her sick but it was what she needed to find out. She much to have misread that Oliver wanted her as his wife. Surely, he much to have wanted her because he knew he was her father. Mary probably hypnotized her brother to confess to the killings. Now, I could understand why she might not want them to live because they know to much. But Oliver won't stand to have his daughter killed, will he? I'm anxious to read more.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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So that's the connection between Oliver and Danielle. I wondered if he wasn't her father but then wasn't sure if her mother actually agreed to a relationship or he raped her. I can't wait to read more.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Jacob,

The plot thickens. How horrible for Danielle to think Oliver is her father. No wonder she wanted to throw up. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 21-Dec-2024
    Jacob,

    You're welcome.
Comment from Begin Again
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So Mary is the "brains" behind everything and she has been manipulating them all with her hypnotism and "therapy". But why did Oliver toss Danielle in the locked room unless he is acceptable of it all? Interesting!!!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Begin Again on 21-Dec-2024
    Just posted some more reading material for you. LOL Have a great day!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Wow, well this is a turn up for the book, Jacob! The wicked witch is really spilling the beans! And looking increasingly like the murderer in all this. Perhaps she was in love with Oliver and jealous of Danielle's mother's relationship with him. And Gavin got in the way and had to be bumped off too. The question is, what does Danielle do now? Intriguing, Jacob! You've beautifully upped the tempo and got me hooked for next time. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.