Deep in the heart of Texas
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Releasing Stress."The real Texas.
5 total reviews
Comment from Elias Noor
A compelling slice of historical fiction with strong atmosphere and authenticity, but it could benefit from more dynamic tension and character development.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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A compelling slice of historical fiction with strong atmosphere and authenticity, but it could benefit from more dynamic tension and character development.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Probably be netter if you started in the beginning, but thanks for your comments.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Charles,
This is a great addition to your story. It seems like things are nice and calm in your town. I bet it won't last that way for long though.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Charles,
This is a great addition to your story. It seems like things are nice and calm in your town. I bet it won't last that way for long though.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Never know about things. Thanks for the nice review.
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You're welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, for me at least, whenever things get to going too good, I start getting worried. They call it the cycle of life for a reason. When things are bad, they usually get better, at least all but once. And when they are good, get ready. They are all going to pieces real soon. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Yes, for me at least, whenever things get to going too good, I start getting worried. They call it the cycle of life for a reason. When things are bad, they usually get better, at least all but once. And when they are good, get ready. They are all going to pieces real soon. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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seams that way. Thanks Ric.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story really paints a clear picture of the Wild West. I loved how you tied in the tension of the gang's movements. The conversation with James felt real. It felt like advice from someone who's been through tough times.
Keep writing. This was such and enjoyable chapter.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Your story really paints a clear picture of the Wild West. I loved how you tied in the tension of the gang's movements. The conversation with James felt real. It felt like advice from someone who's been through tough times.
Keep writing. This was such and enjoyable chapter.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your nice comments.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this story with us. It's another good write.
This removed hidden pressure as I tried placing their actions as a game of hide and seek. Kansas was easy picking for them and Oklahoma offered refuge. I suspected it was but matter of time before
Doolin was either killed or captured. Two weeks later, my suspicion earned Merritt. Clark said Doolin received wounds during a robbery but he never knew the extent. (shouldn't be space between these two & merit)
On the way home, I stopped at my brother James's place. (brother,)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for sharing this story with us. It's another good write.
This removed hidden pressure as I tried placing their actions as a game of hide and seek. Kansas was easy picking for them and Oklahoma offered refuge. I suspected it was but matter of time before
Doolin was either killed or captured. Two weeks later, my suspicion earned Merritt. Clark said Doolin received wounds during a robbery but he never knew the extent. (shouldn't be space between these two & merit)
On the way home, I stopped at my brother James's place. (brother,)
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Barb
