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Comment from Y. M. Roger
An interesting take on reality... has the reader wondering where such ends and imagination begins... or, perhaps, illusions. Would only suggest, perhaps taking a little time to 'proofread' afterwards and remove the 'text' and/or 'abbreviation' remnants as it would be an awesome stream-of-conscience offering.. Thanx so much for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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An interesting take on reality... has the reader wondering where such ends and imagination begins... or, perhaps, illusions. Would only suggest, perhaps taking a little time to 'proofread' afterwards and remove the 'text' and/or 'abbreviation' remnants as it would be an awesome stream-of-conscience offering.. Thanx so much for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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thank you for your points as always...u were right.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed reading your poem! Your words about the darkness creeping into reality really stuck with me. For me you've shared uncertainty that I - and I'm sure many - can relate to. Keep writing and sharing! It's powerful!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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I really enjoyed reading your poem! Your words about the darkness creeping into reality really stuck with me. For me you've shared uncertainty that I - and I'm sure many - can relate to. Keep writing and sharing! It's powerful!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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thank you
Comment from Lana Marie
This is a great place to express your thoughts and feelings in written form for those of us who stumble upon the next item to be reviewed. It's always enjoyable to see inside the hearts and minds of others here. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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This is a great place to express your thoughts and feelings in written form for those of us who stumble upon the next item to be reviewed. It's always enjoyable to see inside the hearts and minds of others here. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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thank you so much
