Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem has such a energy! I love "quick wind" and "gyres" which really brings it to life. You really create a sense of movement with just a few words. It's short but full of feeling! Well done!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2025

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describing the wind, and
a very good second half about the echoes and "wild trees."
-A good entry; good luck!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025

Pam,

Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your reviews and look forward to offering the same of your posts in your portfolio also.

All the best,

Eugene

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Feb-2025

You are very welcome, Eugene, I appreciate your reply.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

had to google "gyre" LOL

anyway, this was a great poem
the image of a ghostly wind echoing through the trees is cool
and then reechoing, too...

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2025

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I felt the breeze in this post as the wind whistled through the trees with speed, not sure what the word (reecho) means, is this a sound effect? An interesting one liner, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2025