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sad heart broken
3 total reviews
Comment from
write hand blue
It is a poem that sounds so
heavy-hearted...Quite
descriptive and
expressive...Good luck
with the competition.
Regards. Mel.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
Comment from
egmosley
W,
Your syllables are correct. I like the questioning and what your friend did....lie...I could follow those two lines, but I was confused by the last line...friend...or fiend?
Comment Written 20-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
thanks and i meant to put friend
Comment from
peggles
This is so sad a friend who let you down hurts so much. True friends are hard to find and must be treasured and held close
I thought this was an emotional piece and enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 20-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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