Stardust
An Ethereal Beauty3 total reviews
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
Hello, my friend.
This is such a beautiful 5-7-5 with some wonderful vocabulary choices- 'clusters,' 'shine brilliantly,' and 'awe'- 'gaze.' Great image to add to your wonderful text! great work and good luck in the contest! Holly
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
Hello, my friend.
This is such a beautiful 5-7-5 with some wonderful vocabulary choices- 'clusters,' 'shine brilliantly,' and 'awe'- 'gaze.' Great image to add to your wonderful text! great work and good luck in the contest! Holly
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your great review. Cheers, Kristina
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You are very welcome!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, kristina, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the stars that catch our eye. i enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
this is very well written, kristina, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the stars that catch our eye. i enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thanks a lot for your great review. Cheers, Kristina
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you inspired me to write one about stars--look back in about 5 minutes.
Comment from mermaids
Your 5-7-5 poem captured a good feeling. The stars are like a night time piece of artwork that many enjoy watching. Good use of words and flow of lines.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
Your 5-7-5 poem captured a good feeling. The stars are like a night time piece of artwork that many enjoy watching. Good use of words and flow of lines.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thanks for your great review. Cheers, Kristina