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Comment from tbacha58
Hi, I enjoyed so much the way you explained your verse, as a kid how one feels about the past. I enjoyed the picture that also explains a lot to the reader, you have a very strong depth when you write, and this kind of writing helps you forget or remember the happy days. Terry.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Hi, I enjoyed so much the way you explained your verse, as a kid how one feels about the past. I enjoyed the picture that also explains a lot to the reader, you have a very strong depth when you write, and this kind of writing helps you forget or remember the happy days. Terry.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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I am glad that you reviewed this older post..so sweet of you and you got it correctly.thanks for the lovely review
Comment from marycec
Beautiful imagery looking back to the safe feelings of childhood but the emerging butterfly has so much delight to look forward to.Thought provoking.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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Beautiful imagery looking back to the safe feelings of childhood but the emerging butterfly has so much delight to look forward to.Thought provoking.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2013
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I am glad you reviewed this.I respect you for it.
You are really a wonderful person.glad to meet you:-)
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well how right you are in your authors notes... many parents do a good job of sheltering as much possible, carving out a shell that is shatter when the world becomes our own... and then in times of need we all look back at all those carefree times of happiness, joy and simple things... how bad it must be for those do not have such a happy childhood... and different they must be when they emerge from their cocoon. Excellent concept, well thought out and delivered, lovely picture to compliment the write also. :)
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Well how right you are in your authors notes... many parents do a good job of sheltering as much possible, carving out a shell that is shatter when the world becomes our own... and then in times of need we all look back at all those carefree times of happiness, joy and simple things... how bad it must be for those do not have such a happy childhood... and different they must be when they emerge from their cocoon. Excellent concept, well thought out and delivered, lovely picture to compliment the write also. :)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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I am a bit surprised.this isn't on the list I think.
I appreciate your sharing of thoughts and I agree,not everyone has the comfy childhood and there are many who face a lot during this phase.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from Loui.T
I liked it but it's not my cup of tea. Although you are a very strong writer. Keep up the good work and good luck for the future:D
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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I liked it but it's not my cup of tea. Although you are a very strong writer. Keep up the good work and good luck for the future:D
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Are you insane?
You must not review a work based on it's theme.
I hope you are aware of ratings.3 star means a lot of change.if you don't know that,just re rate it.
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I would absolutely love it if you could post more and more poems. Like I said you are an extremely strong writer.
Comment from James Chaima Phiri
Is there a person who is spared of this thought? We all want to go back to the days of childhood. It is true that the heart imagines a life which is special. Something you describe as; 'beneath silver-sweet full moon'. Who wants to be out of the cocoon? You remind me of my teacher who once said: "James, school life, a child's life, is the best that nature can offer. Adulthood comes with a lot of challenges." Sweet memories are already flooding my mind. I can rate this work better than 5 stars. Thank you.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Is there a person who is spared of this thought? We all want to go back to the days of childhood. It is true that the heart imagines a life which is special. Something you describe as; 'beneath silver-sweet full moon'. Who wants to be out of the cocoon? You remind me of my teacher who once said: "James, school life, a child's life, is the best that nature can offer. Adulthood comes with a lot of challenges." Sweet memories are already flooding my mind. I can rate this work better than 5 stars. Thank you.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013
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Thanks for sharing your experience,conecting to it and excellent review:-)
Comment from MegPalmer
I am intrigued by the imagery. It's difficult to convey so much with so few words...in this case, less is definitely more.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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I am intrigued by the imagery. It's difficult to convey so much with so few words...in this case, less is definitely more.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Wow!I am amazed and so glad.i appreciate your thoughts and 6 stars.it means a lot.Thanks for your kind words and exceptional review:-)
Comment from Tunderlala
Nicely flowing words and they show very vivid pictures of the butterfly before its maturity. The cocoon is a safe place without struggle and it is so imaginative to parallel it with childhood. Well done. Thank you.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Nicely flowing words and they show very vivid pictures of the butterfly before its maturity. The cocoon is a safe place without struggle and it is so imaginative to parallel it with childhood. Well done. Thank you.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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thank you for this sweet review on an old post and sharing your thoughts.I appreciate it a lot:)
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your are most welcome. I look forward to read more of your works:)
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Anupam,
I'm catching up on my messages. Your first 5-7-5 is beautiful and congratulations it's ALL TIME BEST.
Have a great day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Aloha Anupam,
I'm catching up on my messages. Your first 5-7-5 is beautiful and congratulations it's ALL TIME BEST.
Have a great day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Hello
I am so glad you reviewed my first one.
And it's paying nothing now,just 2 cents.i respect you for this.and wow!it's a beautiful pic.a hearty
thanks:-)
Regards
Shar-A
Comment from ann marie mazz
the format true to form
the theme was enjoyable
who could argue with being a child
if only we could all go back in time
the presentation was lovely
well done all around
I marvel at those who master this format
thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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the format true to form
the theme was enjoyable
who could argue with being a child
if only we could all go back in time
the presentation was lovely
well done all around
I marvel at those who master this format
thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from Xylok
well said, I couldn't agree more. so true. you use the metaphor to get the point across nicely. not out of cocoon; those simpler more innocent times, ah yes, how beautifully they shine in memory.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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well said, I couldn't agree more. so true. you use the metaphor to get the point across nicely. not out of cocoon; those simpler more innocent times, ah yes, how beautifully they shine in memory.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
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no problem, hope to see more of your posts one day too! :)