My Faith Restores
a rondeau185 total reviews
Comment from marycec
A perfect vehicle for the continuation of faith.The rondeau lends itself to the experience of faith returning even when things look bleak. Beautifully executed.Must be a strong contender.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
A perfect vehicle for the continuation of faith.The rondeau lends itself to the experience of faith returning even when things look bleak. Beautifully executed.Must be a strong contender.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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mary, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from ronnie k
I totally ignored the format and allowed the pleasure of reading this gather of beauty to take me to a joyful reading, i may not knowstyles but i am a master of what i like. Thankyou
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
I totally ignored the format and allowed the pleasure of reading this gather of beauty to take me to a joyful reading, i may not knowstyles but i am a master of what i like. Thankyou
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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ronnie, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GWinterwin
Great poem Brooke, your words rhyme good and tell much truth about how our faith restores. Faith in each other but mainly our faith in God.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
Great poem Brooke, your words rhyme good and tell much truth about how our faith restores. Faith in each other but mainly our faith in God.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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GWinterwin, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
A very nice rondeau with a good message to convey, "faith restores" it is certain. Good imagery, lovely rhythm - I like the form.
Patrick
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
Hi Brooke,
A very nice rondeau with a good message to convey, "faith restores" it is certain. Good imagery, lovely rhythm - I like the form.
Patrick
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Patrick, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Janet Foor
"My Faith Restores" is an excellent Rondeau, Brooke. A wonderful daily expression of faith, insightful and inspiring. This was a pleasure to read.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
"My Faith Restores" is an excellent Rondeau, Brooke. A wonderful daily expression of faith, insightful and inspiring. This was a pleasure to read.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Janet, thank you so very much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from jakespeed
wonderful poems 7 stars in my book so be super happy of what you wrote indeed restore your faith with god or what ever see fit.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
wonderful poems 7 stars in my book so be super happy of what you wrote indeed restore your faith with god or what ever see fit.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Thank you, jakespeed, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Cookie333
This is a wonderful expression of faith Brooke, great flow and beautifully presented. Best of luck in the contest
thank you
k
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
This is a wonderful expression of faith Brooke, great flow and beautifully presented. Best of luck in the contest
thank you
k
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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Cookie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from in777wr#
"My faith restores me dawn by dawn", this was a great opening for this poem. The poem flowed well. The message in this poem is strong. This poem is well written. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
"My faith restores me dawn by dawn", this was a great opening for this poem. The poem flowed well. The message in this poem is strong. This poem is well written. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Arthur, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Saucey
This is a pure one, it's a beautiful poem and I love the way it flows, your presentation is soothing to look at and it is a fitting pic. Best wishes in the contest:)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
This is a pure one, it's a beautiful poem and I love the way it flows, your presentation is soothing to look at and it is a fitting pic. Best wishes in the contest:)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Saucey, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Harv
every line every turn every phrase built one upon another brings this to life for me with such ever enduring peace, thank you for the post, i will look back of this often as it is very true and strengths my spirit soul and body
blessings
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
every line every turn every phrase built one upon another brings this to life for me with such ever enduring peace, thank you for the post, i will look back of this often as it is very true and strengths my spirit soul and body
blessings
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Harv, thank you so very much :-) I appreciate your encouraging comments and generous sixth star. Brooke