Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 90 "A snake charmers worry"My book of poems and stories
15 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
I love all animals except spiders and snakes. My choice for the reptile would be as a belt, bag or shoes. Your words seem to paint a gentler image. Best wishes with your entry.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
  |
I love all animals except spiders and snakes. My choice for the reptile would be as a belt, bag or shoes. Your words seem to paint a gentler image. Best wishes with your entry.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
-
I thank you for your review.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Very clever - now you have me thinking ... yes, WHY?
Very nicely done, Annie.
All the best in the contest. Dropping in to say hello. :)
Sonali xx
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
|
Very clever - now you have me thinking ... yes, WHY?
Very nicely done, Annie.
All the best in the contest. Dropping in to say hello. :)
Sonali xx
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
-
Thanks so much for your review and comments.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, when they're out it the wild, nothing prevents them from squeezing the life out of whatever they come across. But, except for very small children, most owners of these large species of snakes have been pretty lucky.
I've handled a 300 pound albino female python before. It was a pet belonging to my wife's uncle. I found it a bit...unnerving, to say the least.
Nice work! Good luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
Well, when they're out it the wild, nothing prevents them from squeezing the life out of whatever they come across. But, except for very small children, most owners of these large species of snakes have been pretty lucky.
I've handled a 300 pound albino female python before. It was a pet belonging to my wife's uncle. I found it a bit...unnerving, to say the least.
Nice work! Good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thank you so much for your review and comments.
Comment from nelliesellie
The snake charmer knows her pet. It is not if he squeezes her neck, but when. Never assume a wild creature will lose its wild ways. Besides, snakes do not have that great a brain. I hear some people makes snakes a part of their religion .It makes me wonder about the size of some human brains. Great work.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
The snake charmer knows her pet. It is not if he squeezes her neck, but when. Never assume a wild creature will lose its wild ways. Besides, snakes do not have that great a brain. I hear some people makes snakes a part of their religion .It makes me wonder about the size of some human brains. Great work.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thank you so much for your review and comments.
Comment from Capricorn30
Excellent!
A well-expressed question in a poem as humans question the cruel acts a snake would carry out in the loving hands of a devoted owner.
I don't think I would let a snake hug me! No thanks.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
|
Excellent!
A well-expressed question in a poem as humans question the cruel acts a snake would carry out in the loving hands of a devoted owner.
I don't think I would let a snake hug me! No thanks.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
-
Thanks so much for your review and comments.
Comment from TAB_that's me
You have a good contest entry for the reptile nature 5-7-5. You have follow all the rules and your syllable count is perfect.
~teresa~
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
|
You have a good contest entry for the reptile nature 5-7-5. You have follow all the rules and your syllable count is perfect.
~teresa~
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
-
Thanks so much for your review and comments.
Comment from lakeport
A snake charmers worry, wow that's a big snake,makes my skin crowl.That's a good questionable 5/7/5 poem,thanks for sharing it,God bless you.Lakeport.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
|
A snake charmers worry, wow that's a big snake,makes my skin crowl.That's a good questionable 5/7/5 poem,thanks for sharing it,God bless you.Lakeport.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
-
Thanks so much for your review and comments. I do appreciate them.
-
your welcome,Lakeport.
-
your welcome,Lakeport.
-
your welcome,Lakeport.
-
your welcome,Lakeport.
-
your welcome,Lakeport.
-
your welcome,Lakeport.
-
your welcome,Lakeport.
-
your welcome,Lakeport.
-
your welcome,Lakeport.
Comment from steevie
That's so weird that a snake won't choke it's charmer ... perhaps the snake has read that old clich© ... never choke the hand that feeds you .... Just sayin' LOL
all the best in the contest
steve
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
|
That's so weird that a snake won't choke it's charmer ... perhaps the snake has read that old clich© ... never choke the hand that feeds you .... Just sayin' LOL
all the best in the contest
steve
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
-
Thanks so much for your review and comments. I do appreciate them.
Comment from Domino 2
Thanks for entering, mystery writer.
LOL at your message here, as who would want to be manipulated and 'charmed' into doing what they don't want to do?
You imply snakes aren't as bad as their bad press implies, and I agree entirely. It's sure not their fault they were born scary-looking to some. Maybe humans scare them more than they scare us. :-)
Good luck, Ted
Clever words, and good luck, Ted
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
|
Thanks for entering, mystery writer.
LOL at your message here, as who would want to be manipulated and 'charmed' into doing what they don't want to do?
You imply snakes aren't as bad as their bad press implies, and I agree entirely. It's sure not their fault they were born scary-looking to some. Maybe humans scare them more than they scare us. :-)
Good luck, Ted
Clever words, and good luck, Ted
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
-
Thank you for your review and comments. I do appreciate them.
Comment from Princesseunice
Perfect picture.
You successfully broke what could have been a single sentence into three lines matching the haiku style.
Great!!
Wishing you the best.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
|
Perfect picture.
You successfully broke what could have been a single sentence into three lines matching the haiku style.
Great!!
Wishing you the best.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
-
Thank you for your review and comments. I do appreciate them.