Shepherd boy-(5-7-5)
watching his sheep3 total reviews
Comment from livelylinda
Author: I don't care for the picture used; it does not enhance the poem but renders it a bit grotesque. I'm thinking that this poet could probably create something better looking and more appealing verbally. Sorry, but that is my honest opinion. As writers, we cannot please all the people all the time. . .livelylinda
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Author: I don't care for the picture used; it does not enhance the poem but renders it a bit grotesque. I'm thinking that this poet could probably create something better looking and more appealing verbally. Sorry, but that is my honest opinion. As writers, we cannot please all the people all the time. . .livelylinda
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Thanks
Comment from kiwisteveh
You have a typo in your title - you may not be able to change that now.
I have awarded four stars because you don't seem to have done anything new or original to make me see this in a different light.
Even the Baaa at the end, which is cute, doesn't seem to add value to the poem.
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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You have a typo in your title - you may not be able to change that now.
I have awarded four stars because you don't seem to have done anything new or original to make me see this in a different light.
Even the Baaa at the end, which is cute, doesn't seem to add value to the poem.
Steve
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Clever and unique 5-7-5 poem with a great subject choice.
Shepherds and sheep just go together like peas in a pod and you have captured this sense of togetherness between a shepherd and his sheep no matter what to perfection.
I love the picture choice.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Clever and unique 5-7-5 poem with a great subject choice.
Shepherds and sheep just go together like peas in a pod and you have captured this sense of togetherness between a shepherd and his sheep no matter what to perfection.
I love the picture choice.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you
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You're very welcome.
Check the title-shepherd is spelt incorrectly.