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To You My Love

5-7-5 heartfelt

21 total reviews 
Comment from tbacha58
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In my heart I feel
Endless possibilities
I give you my all

Hello James, this verse is so romantic, so sincere, so respectful, and it writes at the same time a whole love story between you and your lady. Very beautiful, loved it. Love u Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much my sweetest friend, you have touch my heart in such a way, I have grown in volume... and all due to my heart expanding... love you Mom... so much.

    With our thoughts we create,
    room to expand,
    James xx
Comment from MM lives on :)
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In my heart I feel

Endless possibilities

I give you my all ....

big James...how did I miss this simplistic to the point inspirational message my brother...will be on the road to California next 4 days so had to find something I may havev missed.

TALK SOON PAL...YOU ROCK!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Hi Christopher,
    well, I'm blown away my friend, your review and loyalty have no equal.

    You warm my soul.

    Take it easy on the road... and I hope there is a bit of enjoyment involved with the trip.

    And no... YOU ROCK!

    With our thoughts we create,
    endorphins that promote serotonin,
    James
Comment from Selina Stambi
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Women find it easy to wear their hearts on their sleeves - it really touches me, though, when men write love poetry.

This one is really lovely, James. Written for Jade (did I get her name right?).

Best wishes for the contest.

Have a blessed day.

Sonali

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014
    Hi Sonali,
    yes, you got it exactly right.

    Thank you so much for the appreciation of the emotion that makes life bearable... love in all of its forms warms even the coldest of hearts.

    Thank you for your well wishes, at least three fellow writers enjoyed it and voted for it... and for that I am appreciative, but the true vote was who it was written about, and in that contest, I won hands down.

    A wonderful review, thank you.

    With our thoughts we create,
    abundant love,
    James xx
Comment from RGstar
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Hey, James,
Missed your entry,
Like the image and the words it conveys.
A true sentiment to a true heart.
Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014
    Hi RG,
    thanks brother, I appreciate your heart and all the sentiments it conveys... like I said, a true gentleman... a man of substance.

    With our thoughts we create,
    images to refresh belief,
    James
Comment from amanda98653
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A beautiful 5-7-5 you've written there, James.

Love is a very powerful emotion..and has the ability

Your poem reminds me of how Angelis once said that
"Love's greatest gift is its ability to make everything it touches sacred"

Hugs

Amanda

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014
    Hi Amanda,

    love is definitely a very powerful emotion, and one that saved the life of this writer... for without ever knowing the true meaning of this word I would have been lost in a world of hurt and uncertainty.

    Thank you for such a wonderful review, it is very appreciated.

    With our thoughts we create,
    abundant love,
    James xx
Comment from Dawn Munro
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What a romantic 5-7-5! Who could hear (or read) anything more heart-warming from a loved one than the words you've scribed here?

Very lovely! Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014
    Hi Dawn,
    thank you for your kind words and this wonderful review, as always you are thought of in the highest of regards.

    Contest finished Monday, but thanks for the well wishes... no I didn't win that contest, but I did win the one that counted... with the one that these words were written for... every one's a winner ... just depends how you want to view it.

    With our thoughts we create,
    enough love for everyone,
    James xx
Comment from adewpearl
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Lovely presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 format
good consonance of L sounds in all three lines
I like the flow the multi-syllable possibilities gives the poem, which has a nice romantic, upbeat tone :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014
    Hi Brooke,
    thanks for your wonderful review, most appreciated.
    Hope life on the other side of the pond is good.

    With our thoughts we create,
    conscious thought,
    James xx
Comment from skye
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Endless possibilities is the perfect phrase. That is truly what love is. Endless joy, endless laughter, endless union of two hearts.
Excellent.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
    Hi Skye,
    thank you so much for this insightful review and kind comments... I hope these qualities you have mentioned play out in your own life, for to love and be loved is nourishment for the soul.

    With our thoughts we create,
    endless possibilities,
    James xx
Comment from Ridley Williams
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Hello Poet,
I loved your description of the affects of love on your life. Love truly gives us the ability to look at life from different, more positive angles. Well done and good luck, Bill

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
    Thanks Bill, a truly insightful review, most appreciated... and also a big thank you for the well wishes.
Comment from visionary1234
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a sweet, sweet piece - so hard to say it all within the confines of 17 syllables. You've expressed your love beautifully! :)Sharyn

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
    Hi Sharyn,
    thanks so much for your wonderful review and kind comments, it is most appreciated.