Zombie walk-(5-7-5)
scary zombies walking4 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
DON'T OPEN THE DOOR! I love the picture. Actually, he looks kind of cute. That as , as far as zombies go. My hundred pound dog would have him as a late night snack. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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DON'T OPEN THE DOOR! I love the picture. Actually, he looks kind of cute. That as , as far as zombies go. My hundred pound dog would have him as a late night snack. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Thank you
Comment from flora loucheur
Liked the use of the 'scuff, scuff'. We all know what they look like, but you were clever enough to add their walking sound. Good work.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Liked the use of the 'scuff, scuff'. We all know what they look like, but you were clever enough to add their walking sound. Good work.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Thank you
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a excellent job writing this zombie haiku about the slow walking nature of zombioes. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a excellent job writing this zombie haiku about the slow walking nature of zombioes. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Thank you
Comment from tfawcus
The image you have chosen to accompany your poem adds to the sense of fun. I like the way you have enhanced the jerky movement by missing out words. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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The image you have chosen to accompany your poem adds to the sense of fun. I like the way you have enhanced the jerky movement by missing out words. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Thank you