Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Well, this would certainly stir the determination if sun. This poem is both romantic and inspirational. Well done, Ine.

Av

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely last part of the week, Ine

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

This is a sweet song with a lot of meaning. I enjoyed the read very much. Congrats that it received the All Time Best award too.

Kat

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely last part of the week, Ine

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The photo fits this piece perfectly as the words bring the photo to life. This piece contains a positive message for the til death do us part, for sickness and health, for better or worse couples. This piece should be read by all couples in a storm. Thank you for sharing and to God be the glory.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely last part of the week, Ine

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Perseverance will take us anywhere we desire. It shows strength of character. Giving up is for only the weak and faint hearted.
Strong message for all and well presented

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

Perseverance is really the name of the game, we can't succeed without it for sure. This is well-written. Good job. God loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That's a nice song. I want to make it American too. Commitments are good once we hold on to there. Well thought out. Clearly written. Great message. Nice work.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from krys123

Excellent

What does this song are you asking that we may put a tone to it, or should I say, what is the song that we may help a great tone to it because I can look up that song. I found the book very good and of course done very well. Thank you for the read and for the sharing of this for others. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

reply by krys123 on 26-Feb-2014

You are sincerely welcome Ine

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a beautiful love song. The "we will persevere" lines are loving and encouraging to hold to a loved one. I wish you the best.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

This was a very good song lyric. Good message in this piece. The thought that no matter what happens, "we will persevere" is encouraging. Nice job.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

How lovely and inspirational. This is for both a private meaning for a couple or two people together or a people as a nation or country holding on to freedom together. Wonderful lyrics. mikey

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine