I Feel You Near
pure desire -free verse20 total reviews
Comment from Diny
I so get these sentiments... Just wanted to check in with you.... another deeply romantic and hauntingly real poem! JJ you always touch the poetic soul! Hugs Diny!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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I so get these sentiments... Just wanted to check in with you.... another deeply romantic and hauntingly real poem! JJ you always touch the poetic soul! Hugs Diny!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Hi! I haven't been here in so long! It was awesome to sign in and find your review! Love ya girl
Comment from His Heart Scribe
I absolutely adore the way this author draws the reader into the stanza:
I felt you near today--
as the fingertips of nature
brushed my hair against my cheek
in a surreal morning breeze.
It's as if we were actually able to "feel" the essence of the event. Like we could close our eyes and be at that exact moment in time! Priceless.....
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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I absolutely adore the way this author draws the reader into the stanza:
I felt you near today--
as the fingertips of nature
brushed my hair against my cheek
in a surreal morning breeze.
It's as if we were actually able to "feel" the essence of the event. Like we could close our eyes and be at that exact moment in time! Priceless.....
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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hugz!
Comment from adewpearl
gorgeous presentation of your poem
lonliness - loneliness
lovely alliteration in tranquil tones as you set mood so well
great personification in the fingertips of nature passage
beautiful detail, evocative tone :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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gorgeous presentation of your poem
lonliness - loneliness
lovely alliteration in tranquil tones as you set mood so well
great personification in the fingertips of nature passage
beautiful detail, evocative tone :-) Brooke
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Thanks for stopping in, Brooke.
Comment from Sasha
This is a stunning free verse and I do wish I had a 6 to give you for this. You convey such strong imagery in this one but it is the emotional imagery that took my breath away. I love the entire poem but this verse caused my heart to skip a beat:
I knew your kiss today
for a passing moment-
like the finest of wine
aged to perfection
I sipped your bittersweet love
Your flavor lingers on my tongue...
Absolutely lovely!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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This is a stunning free verse and I do wish I had a 6 to give you for this. You convey such strong imagery in this one but it is the emotional imagery that took my breath away. I love the entire poem but this verse caused my heart to skip a beat:
I knew your kiss today
for a passing moment-
like the finest of wine
aged to perfection
I sipped your bittersweet love
Your flavor lingers on my tongue...
Absolutely lovely!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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thank you Smurphgirl!
Comment from NicciFaye
This is a wonderful experience of a poem to feel the presence of God near is truly an experience and joy. Beautiful and truly a lovely poem. Missed your writings.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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This is a wonderful experience of a poem to feel the presence of God near is truly an experience and joy. Beautiful and truly a lovely poem. Missed your writings.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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thank you
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your free-verse love poem. I particularly enjoyed your images of the "cushioned voice," "fingertips of nature" and "whispers of dawn". The "desire" comes through both your words and the artwork. Hugs and happy weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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I admired your free-verse love poem. I particularly enjoyed your images of the "cushioned voice," "fingertips of nature" and "whispers of dawn". The "desire" comes through both your words and the artwork. Hugs and happy weekend- Joan
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from expressions9
Jewell,
This is beautifully written, so romantic! I love your word choice which transports the reader with great imagery. 4th line - add e, loneliness. The presentation is excellent and there are nice drops of alliteration in sounds/sultry/sighs, whispers/wakened. Thanks for sharing - your poetry is an example of excellent poetry!!
God bless,
love Christine
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Jewell,
This is beautifully written, so romantic! I love your word choice which transports the reader with great imagery. 4th line - add e, loneliness. The presentation is excellent and there are nice drops of alliteration in sounds/sultry/sighs, whispers/wakened. Thanks for sharing - your poetry is an example of excellent poetry!!
God bless,
love Christine
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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aw. thanks for the sixer!
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Hitcher
You have been missing me I see :)I Loved the the power of the emotional longing expressed so exquisitely in your free verse offering Jewell. One can feel the heart ache, the muscles tighten and relax as the senses stroke and caress.
The whispers of dawn... indeed
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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You have been missing me I see :)I Loved the the power of the emotional longing expressed so exquisitely in your free verse offering Jewell. One can feel the heart ache, the muscles tighten and relax as the senses stroke and caress.
The whispers of dawn... indeed
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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You are always so kind!
I think I'm just missing!
Comment from Njorgensen
Very nice job using descriptive words and shades to express the mood and tenor of the piece. I liked the sensuous feel of the poem as well. Good work.
Njorgensn
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Very nice job using descriptive words and shades to express the mood and tenor of the piece. I liked the sensuous feel of the poem as well. Good work.
Njorgensn
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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thanks!
Comment from Ronni
What's especially resplendent about this poem, is that
it has both subtly spiritual overtones, yet with such
serenely sensual tone and imagery throughout. Can be
interpreted as both a realease of longing for loved one,
through still treasured memory, with still very intense
sensations celebrated; all in the backdrop of a truly
ascending dawn of anticipation and beloved patience.
Awesome Jewel, just awesome! You soar with this one!
Love, Ronni
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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What's especially resplendent about this poem, is that
it has both subtly spiritual overtones, yet with such
serenely sensual tone and imagery throughout. Can be
interpreted as both a realease of longing for loved one,
through still treasured memory, with still very intense
sensations celebrated; all in the backdrop of a truly
ascending dawn of anticipation and beloved patience.
Awesome Jewel, just awesome! You soar with this one!
Love, Ronni
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thanks my friend! A sixer, wow. thank you!