Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "For Your Heartache Today"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from DonandVicki
Nice lyrics that flow so well that I can almost hear the tune in my mind. Nice poetic rhythm and rhyme structure, this should be a hit.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Nice lyrics that flow so well that I can almost hear the tune in my mind. Nice poetic rhythm and rhyme structure, this should be a hit.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
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Comment from frogbook
This is quite lovely and sad. Well written with it's repeating line and interesting rhyming. The picture and presentation are perfect also. Really draws the eye in to read.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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This is quite lovely and sad. Well written with it's repeating line and interesting rhyming. The picture and presentation are perfect also. Really draws the eye in to read.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
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Comment from jmdg1954
BMW... This is awesome. I found myself humming a tune to this as I read along.
The words are marvelously chosen telling a story of true feelings.
Nicely done, friend. John
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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BMW... This is awesome. I found myself humming a tune to this as I read along.
The words are marvelously chosen telling a story of true feelings.
Nicely done, friend. John
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Comment from William Ross
This is great I like it a lot beautifully done. well written. very good rhyming and a wonderful flow. thanks for sharing the thoughts and feelings. have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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This is great I like it a lot beautifully done. well written. very good rhyming and a wonderful flow. thanks for sharing the thoughts and feelings. have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
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Comment from Dr. Nad
For Your Heartache Today is a lovely poem that tells the story of another jilted lover. This poem reminds us of the adage in the old song that says, you never know what you got until it's gone. Thanks for baring your soul and showing your vulnerability in this area of your personal life. May God bless you
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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For Your Heartache Today is a lovely poem that tells the story of another jilted lover. This poem reminds us of the adage in the old song that says, you never know what you got until it's gone. Thanks for baring your soul and showing your vulnerability in this area of your personal life. May God bless you
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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You are Welcome, Embrace the Love from Above!
You are Welcome, Embrace the Love from Above!
Comment from chcbeck
These are fantastic lyrics which we all can relate to I am sure. The repetition of the last line ties everything together. Your your words are really well chosen.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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These are fantastic lyrics which we all can relate to I am sure. The repetition of the last line ties everything together. Your your words are really well chosen.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2016
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Comment from SparkleIrem
Love this poem! Its really lovely and expressive. It could be made into a song. In fact, i really think you should make it into a song. ð???ð???
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Love this poem! Its really lovely and expressive. It could be made into a song. In fact, i really think you should make it into a song. ð???ð???
Comment Written 02-Feb-2016
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Comment from robyn corum
I know you need a small vacation, but, that doesn't kill the pain
I had your leaving coming and you won't be back again
--> Brett, just a note - I didn't understand the second line here. Help?
This was another wonderful set of song lyrics. Love, love, LOVE the 'hook'. Great job!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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I know you need a small vacation, but, that doesn't kill the pain
I had your leaving coming and you won't be back again
--> Brett, just a note - I didn't understand the second line here. Help?
This was another wonderful set of song lyrics. Love, love, LOVE the 'hook'. Great job!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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He knows she's gone bye-bye and won't be returning. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from JanPerry
This is your own personal heartache. I doubt it if someone will use it.
Other people have their own feelings to contend with. If you have had people copy you in the past, you should take it up with them.
Actually these would make good verses for a song.. the tears you cry tomorrow are for your heartache today. Country and Western I think.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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This is your own personal heartache. I doubt it if someone will use it.
Other people have their own feelings to contend with. If you have had people copy you in the past, you should take it up with them.
Actually these would make good verses for a song.. the tears you cry tomorrow are for your heartache today. Country and Western I think.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2016
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem uses that refrain in a way that drives home the speaker's impression that this split will result in the lover's realization that she's made a mistake. I tried to imagine this as a song.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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This poem uses that refrain in a way that drives home the speaker's impression that this split will result in the lover's realization that she's made a mistake. I tried to imagine this as a song.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
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