Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

No matter the age of the child, they have their own thoughts and fears. This is very well written with a good touch of imagery.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016

Thank you so much Charlie! Hugs ,Teri

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Hi Teri,
I love reading about Greyson. He's such a cute little chap. I hope you'll keep on writing more stories about him.
Take care.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016

Thank you for the great review. Teri

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I just love reading your adventures with Greyson, and visiting these lovely eating places. We have Indah sleeping over tonight, she's such a blessing. My other daughter's visiting fro Brisbane for about 2 and half weeks, with our beautiful grandsons, they are coming over tomorrow to spend the day with Elaine and me, the boys adore their cousin, so I expect it will be a great day, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2016

I am so happy for you and Elaine. I know you will enjoy them very much. I hope you do write about it. I love reading your work as well my friend! TeriTha

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Wow. I bet that poor little Greyson's eyes were big as silver dollars! *smile* Poor Chuck E. Cheese, never knows how the little kids will react! hahahaha Another great Greyson story! Thanks!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thank you my friend. He did have that big eyes look for a few minutes and ran to me to hold him close. hugs, ,Teri

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

It is a very cute story, well told and enjoyable. I think letting the reader know a little about Greyson, such as his age, etc., would have been a nice addition to the story.
Evi

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thank you for the great review. He is two and a half. I don't think about it since the ones that usually review my work know his age and about him. Teri

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

LOL! Yes, I can imagine Greyson looking up to see a giant mouse and being scared our of his wits. It isn't something we think would happen, but it sure is understandable. Thanks for another fun read. :-)

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thank you for the great review. He was really startled when he saw the mouse! Teri

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

You write so well and you describe not only your family
but the scene is well done that I can actually feel myself
witnessing this event. That's what makes this such a
good story. -Bill

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thank you so much Bill. It was a great time! Have a blessed day! Teri

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Teri, sounds like a lot of fun. It's good to write down these memories for greyson. I did see a typo.. Tom and I (got) to Greyson's......

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thank you my friend. I will fix that! hugs, Teri

Comment from joeruptak

Excellent

I have never been to a Chucky cheese sounds like you really enjoyed yourself. This was a well-written piece about a
family gathering. Your enjoyment made for a happy read. Good job

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

Thank you my friend. It was a great time and you need to visit one some day. The pizza is really good! Teri

Comment from MelB

Excellent

It sounds like this worked out and you had a great time at Chuck E. Cheese. Poor little guy, too bad he got scared by the big mouse.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016

lol Thank you my friend! Teri