Starry Night
5-7-5 Art Entry5 total reviews
Comment from zanya
yes this 5/7/5 Art poem captures a well documented troubled aspect of Van Gogh's life as a painter of world renown - so effectively conveyed within the constraints of the format
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
yes this 5/7/5 Art poem captures a well documented troubled aspect of Van Gogh's life as a painter of world renown - so effectively conveyed within the constraints of the format
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your insights.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is excellent, well written. A beautiful painting. Great choice of artwork for
the contest. You have described the painting well. I wish you much luck in
the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
This is excellent, well written. A beautiful painting. Great choice of artwork for
the contest. You have described the painting well. I wish you much luck in
the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback.
Comment from nor84
I wanted to give you a heads-up review. The contest rules say, "no author notes." This poem appears to have author notes, which you may want to remove.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
I wanted to give you a heads-up review. The contest rules say, "no author notes." This poem appears to have author notes, which you may want to remove.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Thanks!
Comment from RodG
We are so fortunate to have this memorable painting at the Art Institute in Chicago. Your 5-7-5 (as well as your notes) clarifies the contrast between what Van Gogh saw and what he was feeling. The Speaker sounds as if he could be the painter's therapist.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
We are so fortunate to have this memorable painting at the Art Institute in Chicago. Your 5-7-5 (as well as your notes) clarifies the contrast between what Van Gogh saw and what he was feeling. The Speaker sounds as if he could be the painter's therapist.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Many thanks for the insightful review.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
What a lovely piece of art you've chosen as your muse! This is one of my favorites of all times belonging to the Masters. *smile* And I must say, your poem fits the scene perfectly. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
Dear Mystery Poet,
What a lovely piece of art you've chosen as your muse! This is one of my favorites of all times belonging to the Masters. *smile* And I must say, your poem fits the scene perfectly. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your kind comments.