Sleeping dog
a lune contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from pipersfancy
A greyhound and a tiny chihauhua curled up together. When they are relaxed, our canine friend are the epitome of calmness... and of course, they love us unconditionally! Yes, many things we could all learn from our animal companions...
Good luck in the Lune contest,
pf
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A greyhound and a tiny chihauhua curled up together. When they are relaxed, our canine friend are the epitome of calmness... and of course, they love us unconditionally! Yes, many things we could all learn from our animal companions...
Good luck in the Lune contest,
pf
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
Comment from smileycloud
very fine loon form
I truly love your picture
but I love your poem more
such intelligent true wise words
have a smiley day
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very fine loon form
I truly love your picture
but I love your poem more
such intelligent true wise words
have a smiley day
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your lune poem "Sleeping Dog". All your lines and syllables were correct for this genre and I liked your choice of photo. I think we could all from him.
All the best.
Marybell1.
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I enjoyed reading your lune poem "Sleeping Dog". All your lines and syllables were correct for this genre and I liked your choice of photo. I think we could all from him.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes, a sleeping dog has great trust in its owner, and as you say we sometimes learn from our pets, a cute picture for your Lune poem, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Yes, a sleeping dog has great trust in its owner, and as you say we sometimes learn from our pets, a cute picture for your Lune poem, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
Comment from Irish Rain
I know, right? We could learn SO MUCH from the animals!! Cats....'how to be royalty, how to sleep through anything'....dogs....'how to love unconditionally, how to live for the moment'....amazing, love this entry, blessings...
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I know, right? We could learn SO MUCH from the animals!! Cats....'how to be royalty, how to sleep through anything'....dogs....'how to love unconditionally, how to live for the moment'....amazing, love this entry, blessings...
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
Comment from nbonner
This is so true. Dogs are so loyal, loving, and peaceful. I actually have one and he follows me everywhere. If only people were like them then society wouldn't be so screwed. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
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This is so true. Dogs are so loyal, loving, and peaceful. I actually have one and he follows me everywhere. If only people were like them then society wouldn't be so screwed. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Johngie, this is a sweet entry for the Lune Poetry contest. All the syllables are in check and the content itself allows the reader to feel the peace and calm of sleeping animals - like babies when they sleep, so beautiful to watch. The picture attached is adorable. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
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Johngie, this is a sweet entry for the Lune Poetry contest. All the syllables are in check and the content itself allows the reader to feel the peace and calm of sleeping animals - like babies when they sleep, so beautiful to watch. The picture attached is adorable. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Lovely imagery to accompany your poem speaking to the absolute humble and living creature, the dog. Excellent choice of words describing dogs. If only we could be more like them.
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Lovely imagery to accompany your poem speaking to the absolute humble and living creature, the dog. Excellent choice of words describing dogs. If only we could be more like them.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What 2 cuties these lovable friends are. The picture is so sweet. Good job on your syllable count as well. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
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What 2 cuties these lovable friends are. The picture is so sweet. Good job on your syllable count as well. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
Comment from l.raven
so very sweet my friend...they are like our children when they sleep...precious angels...and they do learn from each other...so very nicely written...and I love your picture...love Linda xxoo
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so very sweet my friend...they are like our children when they sleep...precious angels...and they do learn from each other...so very nicely written...and I love your picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017