Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Very interesting thought and so original also. A clever poem in a clever form. Great interpretation of the picture and quite enjoyable.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018

Thanks very much.
Do you get behind on message replying? Seems like in ALWAYS behind with reviews etc.
Hugs, Trisha

reply by frogbook on 21-Feb-2018

Oh, my gosh, yes I do get behind, rarely completely overwhelmed even and can't do them all.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Trisha;
Very interesting take on the photo for Pix this. I like how you used the shadows to emphasize the time of day as 'before sunrise.' It is amazing to me how different folks saw different things in this pic. Well done and thank you for sharing,

~patty~

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thanks very much , patti

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

LOL - I love your "mexican clad figures" take....I could see
the outlines drawing you there :-)

I forget the name of this form, but you executed it wonderfully...

Very nicely done :-)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thanks Leineco I appreciate your comlimentary review. It?s Triolet style.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks strangers came in dream all before the morning and went away along the snow covered trees before sunrise; well said, well done, thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, MOVE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

THANK YOU

Comment from joycetreasures

Good

I revisited the poem and the guidelines and understand the process better for the poem. Nice poem and I have rerated it. I do like the first line, "Before sunrise they all came." Feeling unhappy because the snow is gone is also shows feelings. Thanks

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

THANK YOU FOR YOUR 2 STARS? PLEASE READ REVIEWER GUIDLINES. THE STYLE OF THIS POEM IS A TRICOLET STYLE
I COULD NOT DO MUCH WITH 8 LINES TWO OF WHICH REPEAT. THE IDEA OF IT WAS THE OUTLINES OF THE TREES LOOKED TO ME LIKE MEXICAN DRESSED PEOPLE ! AS THEY CAME TO PLAY.

MAYBE YOU WOULD PREFER NOT TO REVIEW MY POSTS, I CERTAINLY PREFER HIGHER THAN 2 Stars.

reply by joycetreasures on 15-Feb-2018

Sorry, you are correct. I shouldn't reviewed the guidelines. Now I do understand this poem a little better. My fault. I will re-rate. Thanks

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Much appreiated

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Much appreiated

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A clever write and the Mexican clad figures? Is that because they look like they are wearing aztec style clothing? Anyway I liked your write Trisha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Yes, that was the first impression I got. Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha