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FAMILY TIES.

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"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about the partners and friends who are thinking of the Halloween Day, how much they are planning to celebrate, enjoy and finding how is about their preparation; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

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When Halloween comes I hide in the closet, waiting for the night to pass. My door never rings, but ghost and goblins try to scare me. Once I looked out the window and a witch flew by me. She wanted to play and I said "no way!" So I hide in the closet rattling my bones on that night of eve.
Sorry about we meeting me. You see I'm also crazy. I like your poem It moved me to write.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

Comment from kiwijenny
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The best thing about Halloween is the chocolate,,,oh and I've made a monster with slime in his nostrils...it's oozy gooey fun...kids love slime.
Well,penned ..makes me look forward to it
God bless

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018

Comment from meeshu
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you poetry is always so fun and uplifting, Rhonnie. it must be because you are young and not yet twisted by society's pliers. try to stay that way............meeshu

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2018
    HELLO MEESHU: While I appreciate this heart-warming complement from you. For your information...my age is "72." But I've been a children's writer for so long...I write with a child's heart...and I'm still going strong. I am a former child...and I haven't forgotten a thing. And I've weathered the storms, society's pliers had to bring. Throughout my life, there's been many triers,
    but youth won't allow them to pinch me with their pliers. Thank you for the stars, meeshu...and I'll rhyme that with, I love you too.
    Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by meeshu on 17-Sep-2018
    good for you, Rhonnie! now I am even more impressed by your writing. stay fresh.........meeshu