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Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "A Party to Die For "Eclectic style
16 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem, everything is not always what it seems and we ofte are blindsided by the picture we are given and the hidden dark and dangerous we cannot see will get us under.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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A very well-written poem, everything is not always what it seems and we ofte are blindsided by the picture we are given and the hidden dark and dangerous we cannot see will get us under.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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I never wrote about a dark side before, bu this was a challenge for Halloween. Thank you so much for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Ogden
Killer, indeed! I wonder if the invitation can attract enough sufficiently masochistic suicidal sybarites to get the party swinging?
Have fun, Bucketlist!
Don
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Killer, indeed! I wonder if the invitation can attract enough sufficiently masochistic suicidal sybarites to get the party swinging?
Have fun, Bucketlist!
Don
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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I don?t know any of those! Thanks Ogden for teaching me a new vocabulary word in your review
Hugs, Trisha
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You're very welcome, Trisha. (You did't know 'sufficiently'?)
Hugs back at you.
Don
Comment from Kay Seed
This could either be on an invitation to a fun halloween-themed party, or an invitation from an adulteress. I came up with the latter meaning from the picture. Interesting juxtaposition. Good job!
-Kay
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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This could either be on an invitation to a fun halloween-themed party, or an invitation from an adulteress. I came up with the latter meaning from the picture. Interesting juxtaposition. Good job!
-Kay
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Kay. Either way she?s a seductress! I appreciated your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from DonandVicki
The artwork that you chose to enhance your poem is essential. I enjoyed the play on words and I can see that a man will die for beauty. There are many tales of the sea where mermaids lead sailors into the shoals.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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The artwork that you chose to enhance your poem is essential. I enjoyed the play on words and I can see that a man will die for beauty. There are many tales of the sea where mermaids lead sailors into the shoals.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Thank you very much for your kind review. It? kinda macabre , but seems to be a welll accepted piece for the Halloween season!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from WildWithWords
An interesting notion to go with an equally interesting picture. Did you write this with the picture in mind? Needs a bigger font. LOL!
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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An interesting notion to go with an equally interesting picture. Did you write this with the picture in mind? Needs a bigger font. LOL!
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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Hi Bill, no o saw the picture first and just had to write about what came to mind.
Thanks very much for your kind . Review
Hugs , Trisha
Comment from kiwijenny
She's ribbing him. And I don't know if it's a bone-ified invitation.
No skeletons in her closet ...she doesn't have one....rumors are he will be des-pond ant after. Ok make me stop
I enjoyed this ...maybe too much
God bless
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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She's ribbing him. And I don't know if it's a bone-ified invitation.
No skeletons in her closet ...she doesn't have one....rumors are he will be des-pond ant after. Ok make me stop
I enjoyed this ...maybe too much
God bless
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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LOL, loved your clever review. It was a very macabre picture which had to be ekphrasically penned.
Thanks so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Loredana
Perfect poem for the picture. Every word you chose matches the image perfectly. I mostly enjoyed the 'killer party' that goes well with the bottom part of the picture, and 'it will leave you breathless'.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Perfect poem for the picture. Every word you chose matches the image perfectly. I mostly enjoyed the 'killer party' that goes well with the bottom part of the picture, and 'it will leave you breathless'.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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I?m glad you enjoyed reading my poem, Thank you so much for your complimentary review,
Hugs, Trisha
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I?m glad you enjoyed reading my poem, Thank you so much for your complimentary review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Anntonette
The image goes soooooo well with the write up because she is trying to lure him into the lake where you could die (party to die for) I love this , it's different! The man is afraid. This has some kind of theme to it, which I cannot put my finger on right now :)
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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The image goes soooooo well with the write up because she is trying to lure him into the lake where you could die (party to die for) I love this , it's different! The man is afraid. This has some kind of theme to it, which I cannot put my finger on right now :)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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Could it be payback, jealousy, or just macabre thinking?! I really appreciate your great review.
Hugs Trisha
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Could it be payback, jealousy, or just macabre thinking?! I really appreciate your great review.
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yu-u-uck! ;) ;) We're Into the play in words and outlandish picture mood, I see! lol! Wherever did you find that aweful--ly interesting pic? I think I would have had to post it as well....certainly puts the 'author brain' in gear!! Thanks for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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Yu-u-uck! ;) ;) We're Into the play in words and outlandish picture mood, I see! lol! Wherever did you find that aweful--ly interesting pic? I think I would have had to post it as well....certainly puts the 'author brain' in gear!! Thanks for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018
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I find all kinds of interesting pictures on Pinterest! Macabre? Yes! Yet for Halloween it shouted ? Get out of your comfort zone!? Thanks very much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha,
Yes, those sirens invite the sailors to come to the party beneath the sea. Little do the sailors realize that following the sirens will surely mean their death. Men simply can't breathe underwater.
Well presented and worded in such a way to make the reader think it through,
~MP~
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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Hi, Trisha,
Yes, those sirens invite the sailors to come to the party beneath the sea. Little do the sailors realize that following the sirens will surely mean their death. Men simply can't breathe underwater.
Well presented and worded in such a way to make the reader think it through,
~MP~
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much Patty
Hugs, Trisha