As Autumn Turns
Trinet Poetry7 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I really enjoy the format and style of the trinet poem. Your word choices and descriptions really paint a beautiful autumn scene. This is a well-written poem and a wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
I really enjoy the format and style of the trinet poem. Your word choices and descriptions really paint a beautiful autumn scene. This is a well-written poem and a wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much, Cindy for your encouragement and review.
Comment from fm wright
A beautifully written trinet poem and a wonderful entry for the contest. I like the way this poem flows and how the three verses all fit so well together. Wishing you the best with it.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
A beautifully written trinet poem and a wonderful entry for the contest. I like the way this poem flows and how the three verses all fit so well together. Wishing you the best with it.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much. I?m encouraged by your comments. This was the first Trinet poem I have tried and I wanted to convey a rainy day in late fall.
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Well it worked and you're welcome.
Comment from kiwijenny
Icy rime....makes me want to google ...I'm not sure what rime means but it seems to fit
Love this poem ..I also wish changing rhymed with banging...I love onomatopoeia
Well penned and gorgeous photo
Happy November
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
Icy rime....makes me want to google ...I'm not sure what rime means but it seems to fit
Love this poem ..I also wish changing rhymed with banging...I love onomatopoeia
Well penned and gorgeous photo
Happy November
God bless
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much. I?ll add a definition that rime means frost. I really appreciate you taking the time to review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I've not seen this style before and this is very atmospheric and descriptive of the season and the November leaves falling, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
I've not seen this style before and this is very atmospheric and descriptive of the season and the November leaves falling, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thanks for your comments and review!
Comment from Anntonette
We associate autumn with cold breeze and short season because right after we see snow on the ground and immediately we say winter is here! Winter is here! I wish autumn could of lasted longer. - Anntonette
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
We associate autumn with cold breeze and short season because right after we see snow on the ground and immediately we say winter is here! Winter is here! I wish autumn could of lasted longer. - Anntonette
Comment Written 07-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018
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Thanks for your great comments and review.
Comment from ruzu27
The colored leaves invite the reader to a poetic and quiet poem.
The following lines tell the story:
First stanza: ...dreamy slumber/sleepy morning/in November
Second stanza:... the puddle below/rainy evening/in November
Third stanza:... chilliness into white cold/frosty night/in November
I like your poem. Reading it, one senses winter coming. Thank you for sharing.
Ruth
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
The colored leaves invite the reader to a poetic and quiet poem.
The following lines tell the story:
First stanza: ...dreamy slumber/sleepy morning/in November
Second stanza:... the puddle below/rainy evening/in November
Third stanza:... chilliness into white cold/frosty night/in November
I like your poem. Reading it, one senses winter coming. Thank you for sharing.
Ruth
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments.
Comment from miajaffri
A very well written Trinet poem about Autumn with great descriptions. I feel like I'm there with the thunder rolling, drizzle falling, the softly pitter patter of raindrops, the branches banging and the breezes changing all on a November night.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
A very well written Trinet poem about Autumn with great descriptions. I feel like I'm there with the thunder rolling, drizzle falling, the softly pitter patter of raindrops, the branches banging and the breezes changing all on a November night.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review. I can feel the seasons changing and wanted to write about the rainy fall days.
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Wish we'd get some rain here in California. I'd love to find my umbrella and walk in the rain.