Dreams of Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Wind Dancers"A word collage about my life.
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Chain Rhyme poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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This is a very well written Chain Rhyme poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thank you Teri for the stars, the best wishes and the wonderfully kind review!
Comment from KatyM
The imagery in this poem is wonderful. I can see the horses being by their foal or just grazing. Very well done.
I have no additions or subtractions. So do you have any horses?
I love horses but I have never had one.
katy
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The imagery in this poem is wonderful. I can see the horses being by their foal or just grazing. Very well done.
I have no additions or subtractions. So do you have any horses?
I love horses but I have never had one.
katy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thank you so ever much for the exceptional rating and the kind review. I don't currently have any horses but I have neighbors who do.
Comment from patcelaw
Very well written Chain Rhyme contest entry. It is a pleasure to read and your presentation. is excellent. Have a blessed day. Patricia.
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Very well written Chain Rhyme contest entry. It is a pleasure to read and your presentation. is excellent. Have a blessed day. Patricia.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thank you. I greatly appreciate both the stars and the review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Chain Rhyme writing prompt.
This is the first Chain Rhyme that I have seen, and it seems to be very good. You have managed the rhyming sequence and told a story of retired race horses within the verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Chain Rhyme writing prompt.
This is the first Chain Rhyme that I have seen, and it seems to be very good. You have managed the rhyming sequence and told a story of retired race horses within the verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thank you. Your comments and the lovely stars are much appreciated.
Comment from beizanten
Pretty good opening the second and fourth line rhyme well. A pretty good second stanza. A better third stanza. Good ending, I wish you best of luck with the contest.
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Pretty good opening the second and fourth line rhyme well. A pretty good second stanza. A better third stanza. Good ending, I wish you best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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I thank you for the stars and the review on each of the stanzas.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello FMWright!
First of all, how I wish I six stars to assign to this beautiful poetic offering. I have read it twice, and it is softly lyrical and moving. The subject matter is so unique. Where do all the horses go? Thank you for this lovely Chain poem and the visual and emotive images it creates.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Hello FMWright!
First of all, how I wish I six stars to assign to this beautiful poetic offering. I have read it twice, and it is softly lyrical and moving. The subject matter is so unique. Where do all the horses go? Thank you for this lovely Chain poem and the visual and emotive images it creates.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 30-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018
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Thank you Mrs. KT for the 5 beautiful stars and the lovely comments.