Taking a Sick Day
50-word Dribble Fiction8 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is an adorable and lovable write that you have entered for this Dribble contest prompt. I am glad it worked out for Toothy to have a day off since she had Fae Fever. Too cute! Good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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This is an adorable and lovable write that you have entered for this Dribble contest prompt. I am glad it worked out for Toothy to have a day off since she had Fae Fever. Too cute! Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the wonderful comments, Melissa -- always appreciate your time and input, ma'am! :) ;) Have a great evening!
Comment from WryWriter
I'm counting ho-ho-ho as one word. The toothy truth is this is darling and an unexpected Christmas dribble tale that is a most enjoyable read. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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I'm counting ho-ho-ho as one word. The toothy truth is this is darling and an unexpected Christmas dribble tale that is a most enjoyable read. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the wonderful review, WryWriter, so glad you enjoyed -- happy holidays! ;) :)
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Very cute and wow 50 words. Fantastic! If only I could do something so short. I can't barely write a review this short! LOL. I like the dialogue and I love the photo that you captured the essence when you put this contest entry together. It seems like this is something fun and looks easy but I bet this is very difficult to pull off! Good luck in your contest. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Very cute and wow 50 words. Fantastic! If only I could do something so short. I can't barely write a review this short! LOL. I like the dialogue and I love the photo that you captured the essence when you put this contest entry together. It seems like this is something fun and looks easy but I bet this is very difficult to pull off! Good luck in your contest. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Thanx for dropping by and for your encouraging comments, Ms. Snyder -- have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
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You have a wonderful weekend as well. Cheers, Fonda
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent fun flash story for the contest
Good for adults and children and just right for the holiday season
A lot of people need sick days this time of year.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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This is an excellent fun flash story for the contest
Good for adults and children and just right for the holiday season
A lot of people need sick days this time of year.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Thanx for dropping by and for your encouraging comments, RS -- have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
Comment from Wabigoon
Sorry, don't follow here. Don't follow the story. I think I am supposed to have more words in the review than you have in the story. Otherwise it is declined. I cannot say much more than I don't follow. It has something to do with teeth, but what?
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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Sorry, don't follow here. Don't follow the story. I think I am supposed to have more words in the review than you have in the story. Otherwise it is declined. I cannot say much more than I don't follow. It has something to do with teeth, but what?
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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The tooth fairy is sick and calls Santa (st Nick) to cover her deliveries...
Comment from jmshumate
Hah, this is a cute bit of fantasy you have written. "Fae fever in December" sounds like something the tooth fairy would come down with in December. And it helps that she is personal friends with Santa Clause to pick up her shift delivering dollar bills. Good creativity in this short piece. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Hah, this is a cute bit of fantasy you have written. "Fae fever in December" sounds like something the tooth fairy would come down with in December. And it helps that she is personal friends with Santa Clause to pick up her shift delivering dollar bills. Good creativity in this short piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Thanx for dropping by and for your encouraging comments, JM -- have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, good dribble fiction, I think the idea of Santa having a sickie is quite original and fun, a poem that would have wide appeal, I imagine. I saw no errors and the picture works well with the poem. Good luck with this for the writing prompt. And thank you for sharing your writing today, cheers, Anastasia.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Hello, good dribble fiction, I think the idea of Santa having a sickie is quite original and fun, a poem that would have wide appeal, I imagine. I saw no errors and the picture works well with the poem. Good luck with this for the writing prompt. And thank you for sharing your writing today, cheers, Anastasia.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Thanx for dropping by, Anastasia, although it wasn't Santa that was sick...:) Have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)
Comment from RodG
Young readers like my seven-year-old granddaughter who has four missing teeth will love this story of the tooth fairy who makes a deal with Santa on Christmas Eve.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Young readers like my seven-year-old granddaughter who has four missing teeth will love this story of the tooth fairy who makes a deal with Santa on Christmas Eve.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018
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Thanx for dropping by and maybe you could enhance it a bit for the granddaughter, Rod! :) ;) Have a wonderful weekend! :) ;)