Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Touch"My Collection of Love Poetry
7 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love the title, "Touch." The artwork is an excellent choice, with the hand in black and white, and with the bright red heart, held onto the finger with a chain. Your first line is my favorite. "You saw my darkness" is almost whispered, to a personal love, and sets the tone for the rest of the piece. You say a lot in a 5-7-5 poem. This is well written and is very romantic. Thank you for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I love the title, "Touch." The artwork is an excellent choice, with the hand in black and white, and with the bright red heart, held onto the finger with a chain. Your first line is my favorite. "You saw my darkness" is almost whispered, to a personal love, and sets the tone for the rest of the piece. You say a lot in a 5-7-5 poem. This is well written and is very romantic. Thank you for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hi, Jesse, how nice of you to review my penning. Thank you very much for the complimentary review. I?m glad you enjoyed it. I hope your pursuits are going well.
Hugs, Trisha
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Hi Trisha
There are some bumps on the road, but I'm still rolling along. Thanks for asking. I hope you are well, also.
Jesse
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It?s taken me a long time to expunge my narcissistic husband?s damage. Writing poetry has enabled me to get a view of the real me instead of the aweful person he had me almost believing. Keep believing you are NOT the negatives you were abused by.
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Good for you, Trisha! You are a shining example of how to not let the abusers win by taking my belief in myself away. Thank you for your advice! I will keep believing, as you say.
Jesse
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You are unique and worthy of love. It?s a mistake to look for our acceptance and validation from others. That only causes confusion , look INWAR first
By the way, I admire your openness in your poetry.
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You are unique and worthy of love. It?s a mistake to look for our acceptance and validation from others. That only causes confusion , look INWAD first
By the way, I admire your openness in your poetry.
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That mistake has caused me a lifetime of grief. Your advice is sound. Looking inward is the way.
Open is the only way I've ever written poetry. It is one of my strengths.
Jesse
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It?s like we have to give ourselves the permission to be ourselves first. Then any validation from outside of our real self is bonus.
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Yes. I see what you mean. Thanks for all the great advice.
Jesse
Comment from Debra White
Hello Bucketlist :)
I really enjoy your 5-7-5 poem.
There is nothing more healing than the touch of a loving and familiar hand.
Beautiful presentation.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Hello Bucketlist :)
I really enjoy your 5-7-5 poem.
There is nothing more healing than the touch of a loving and familiar hand.
Beautiful presentation.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for a great review
Hugs, TRisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the ability and power of the right person in our lives that can instantly take away our emotional pain with their tender and carring touch of our hearts.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the ability and power of the right person in our lives that can instantly take away our emotional pain with their tender and carring touch of our hearts.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for a great review
Hugs, TRisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely romance poem in time for Valentine's day, and beautifully presented. I love the sentiments in the central line
A knowing touch of your hand
very nice.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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This is a lovely romance poem in time for Valentine's day, and beautifully presented. I love the sentiments in the central line
A knowing touch of your hand
very nice.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for a great review
Hugs, TRisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is beautiful Trisha, you touched my heart with these well meaning words. A beautiful write for Valentines, I wish I had a love like that, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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This is beautiful Trisha, you touched my heart with these well meaning words. A beautiful write for Valentines, I wish I had a love like that, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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It was a fleeting dreamy time, when cloud 9 passed over. But it allowed me to see past where i am.
Thank you for your complimentary review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - there is a lot written in those words but even more, I suspect, that is lurking behind and winding around them -- just a lovely 5-7-5 brimming with emotion, Trisha! :) Great composition! :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Wow - there is a lot written in those words but even more, I suspect, that is lurking behind and winding around them -- just a lovely 5-7-5 brimming with emotion, Trisha! :) Great composition! :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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AHH, YES! You perceptive lady. Thank you for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
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Sometimes, the blonde gets it right....LOL! ;) ;)
Comment from Joanna S. Blue
This is a fine example of a haiku and its progression and development of ideas.
It establishes a situation and expands on it and resolves it. The language flows and
is very gentle. Lovely.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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This is a fine example of a haiku and its progression and development of ideas.
It establishes a situation and expands on it and resolves it. The language flows and
is very gentle. Lovely.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thank you for a great review
Hugs, Trisha