Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Cupid Day"My Collection of Love Poetry
10 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like your little rhymed poem. It makes me feel good. Even your color choices make me feel good. Life is simple--wine, candy, roses. Cupid won't miss. There will be hot romance. This is the way that life should be.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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I like your little rhymed poem. It makes me feel good. Even your color choices make me feel good. Life is simple--wine, candy, roses. Cupid won't miss. There will be hot romance. This is the way that life should be.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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You help me feel good with your positive reviews, thanks so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great Valentine poem, bucketlist. I like the color scheme, the rhymes, and your message. This style of meter, anapest, is difficult for me. So I will not comment on that aspect. But it sounded great read aloud. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This is a great Valentine poem, bucketlist. I like the color scheme, the rhymes, and your message. This style of meter, anapest, is difficult for me. So I will not comment on that aspect. But it sounded great read aloud. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Go ahead! Give me your opinion on my anapest try. I?m honored that you review my penning, and I thank you
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet Valentine's write Trisha and I used to have roses every year from my husband delivered to me at work, it was always such a lovely surprise, your poem is sweet and and romantic, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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A sweet Valentine's write Trisha and I used to have roses every year from my husband delivered to me at work, it was always such a lovely surprise, your poem is sweet and and romantic, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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You were a lucky lady to be married to a romantic man! I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
You wrote a good valentine poem. Good job expressing hope that Cupid actually knows what he's doing. Good luck in your Relationships and writing. Good rhyming!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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You wrote a good valentine poem. Good job expressing hope that Cupid actually knows what he's doing. Good luck in your Relationships and writing. Good rhyming!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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There?s always hope, it?s called dreaming! Bill, I think women have to realize that romance has to coached unless it?s modeled in childhood. We learn a great deal then , just by observation. Thank you so much for your good luck review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a lovely little Valentine write here, Trisha -- you're definitely that true romantic at heart and it shows so beautifully here in your words! ;) ;) Thanx so much for sharing and hope you have a romantic evening with that special someone! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Such a lovely little Valentine write here, Trisha -- you're definitely that true romantic at heart and it shows so beautifully here in your words! ;) ;) Thanx so much for sharing and hope you have a romantic evening with that special someone! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Yes Ma?am! What I write is what I feel, not what I get! I really appreciate your positive review yet AGAIN
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from JudyE
There must be so many hopes raised, and probably a lot dashed, on Valentines Day. Your poem covers all the bases - flowers, candy, wine, sweet words, soft music. What more could a girl ask for? I can't suggest any improvements.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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There must be so many hopes raised, and probably a lot dashed, on Valentines Day. Your poem covers all the bases - flowers, candy, wine, sweet words, soft music. What more could a girl ask for? I can't suggest any improvements.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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A real male instead of the poem! I do agree with you.i Thanks so much for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Trisha.
-I like your Valentine's poem and hope
you had a good Valentine's Day.
-I like line and examples of " a caring deed."
-The second verse is very good,
and I like the last two lines about
"soft music for dancing" and
cupid getting things right.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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-Nice image and presentation, Trisha.
-I like your Valentine's poem and hope
you had a good Valentine's Day.
-I like line and examples of " a caring deed."
-The second verse is very good,
and I like the last two lines about
"soft music for dancing" and
cupid getting things right.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I was elated that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you very much for your great review
Hugs,Trisha
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You are very welcome, Trisha, and thank you for the lovely reply.
Comment from Helena Frances
A fun read--if only he is aware enough to maintain the romance after hitting the target of her heart :)
Sometimes a callous forms around the entry site :(
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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A fun read--if only he is aware enough to maintain the romance after hitting the target of her heart :)
Sometimes a callous forms around the entry site :(
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Mmmm, yes, I agree. My fantasy male has no callous making abilities!!!
Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
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:)
Comment from kiwijenny
Yeah yeah I know but my husband has never got this message...the only time we came near celebrating St Valentines...not that I got chocolate or flowers is seven years ago on Feb 14 our friend Daryl had a triple by pass...when I asked if there was any valentines he said he'd taken me to a heart surgery what more did I want. I love this man....
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Yeah yeah I know but my husband has never got this message...the only time we came near celebrating St Valentines...not that I got chocolate or flowers is seven years ago on Feb 14 our friend Daryl had a triple by pass...when I asked if there was any valentines he said he'd taken me to a heart surgery what more did I want. I love this man....
God bless
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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It was never texted to my husband either! A quick burger, a quick ?oh yea? and then a quick.... LOL
Hugs, Trisha
Ps thank you for the chuckle
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Lol
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a wonderful response for the Potlatch Poetry prompt. I would mention that in the second stanza, second line.. there is a misspelled word. I enjoyed reading this poem of affection. Good write.
Melissa
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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This is a wonderful response for the Potlatch Poetry prompt. I would mention that in the second stanza, second line.. there is a misspelled word. I enjoyed reading this poem of affection. Good write.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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One eagle eyed ?catch? of my spelling mistake gets you a nomination for reviewer of the month. Thanks so much for a great REVIEW
Hugs,TRISHA