The Poet Tree
how nature can deliver poetry23 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Warren
Yes, nature does inspire a lot of poetry. I can imagine the poet sitting under that tree listening to the breeze and coming up with all sorts of wonderful ideas.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Yes, nature does inspire a lot of poetry. I can imagine the poet sitting under that tree listening to the breeze and coming up with all sorts of wonderful ideas.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thanks so sincerely Cindy, for your lovely review and stars, so very much appreciated! hope you always stay close! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from victor 66
Yes, I could see trees, wind and a park could very well be a muse for a poet. Your poem made me think of a friend long dead, and one night on his anniversary of him being gone, I walked through a nature center where there was a park bench dedicated to him. I sat there that October night on the bench with the wind, orange sky and it was very dark. I sat there and felt very close to my friend. Yes, parks, trees, and wind make such sounds that we feel we must write something. I enjoyed your poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Yes, I could see trees, wind and a park could very well be a muse for a poet. Your poem made me think of a friend long dead, and one night on his anniversary of him being gone, I walked through a nature center where there was a park bench dedicated to him. I sat there that October night on the bench with the wind, orange sky and it was very dark. I sat there and felt very close to my friend. Yes, parks, trees, and wind make such sounds that we feel we must write something. I enjoyed your poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much Victor, for your lovely review and stars, so very sincerely appreciated. HIS GRAYNESS, Vance
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You are most welcome, Vance. My pleasure.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, Vance.
-Very good imagery and rhyme.
-I like the theme of "The Poet Tree."
-Good play on words, too.
-I like the nature references
as you describe poetry:
"She gathers her beloved
birds and bees..."
-The singing is joyful,
and "poet has blessed the day."
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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-Very nice image, Vance.
-Very good imagery and rhyme.
-I like the theme of "The Poet Tree."
-Good play on words, too.
-I like the nature references
as you describe poetry:
"She gathers her beloved
birds and bees..."
-The singing is joyful,
and "poet has blessed the day."
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much PAM, for your lovely review and stars, so very sincerely appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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You are quite welcome, Vance.
Comment from Janilou
Her branches and leaves make her only voice
But their wisdom indeed delivers great choice
She gathers her beloved birds and bees as the crickets
And flies bow down on their knees
Their singing begins a joyful sound
And the park is delighted all around
And so, the poet has blessed the day
Exactly as she planned it that way.
I really enjoyed this. What a wonderful way to describe the tree.
I found nothing to correct or edit.
Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Her branches and leaves make her only voice
But their wisdom indeed delivers great choice
She gathers her beloved birds and bees as the crickets
And flies bow down on their knees
Their singing begins a joyful sound
And the park is delighted all around
And so, the poet has blessed the day
Exactly as she planned it that way.
I really enjoyed this. What a wonderful way to describe the tree.
I found nothing to correct or edit.
Jan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much Janilou, for your lovely review and stars so very sincerely appreciated; HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Gloria ....
Well it's always nice to have a poet tree around, because that makes for some excellent poetry. Sounds like nature came through here.
Delightful poem, Vance and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Well it's always nice to have a poet tree around, because that makes for some excellent poetry. Sounds like nature came through here.
Delightful poem, Vance and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much dear Gloria, for your wonderful review so very sincerely appreciated...HUGS! Love! Vance
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love the joyful sounds of your poet tree, Vance. Your tree trembles because it is so anxious to deliver it's poetry. What a charming image! Your whimsical tree loves and gathers the birds, bees, flies, and crickets to release it's beloved poems that bless and delight.
You have created a special poem that I will remember..
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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I love the joyful sounds of your poet tree, Vance. Your tree trembles because it is so anxious to deliver it's poetry. What a charming image! Your whimsical tree loves and gathers the birds, bees, flies, and crickets to release it's beloved poems that bless and delight.
You have created a special poem that I will remember..
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanks so very much Debbie, for your very lovely review and stars so very sincerely appreciated! please stay close! Vance
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Ahhhh, yes, let the breezes begin and the birdsong rise!! ;) ;) A wonderful free verse image and offering for today, Vance -- thank you for sharing! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Ahhhh, yes, let the breezes begin and the birdsong rise!! ;) ;) A wonderful free verse image and offering for today, Vance -- thank you for sharing! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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My joy Yvette, hearing from you..please stay close! Vance
Comment from Cybertron1986
Such a vivid and lively chorus of descriptive expression. It had my senses and emotions right there in the park. I adore the use of the insects and animals that are associated with the tree's persona. A very unique piece. Beautiful
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Such a vivid and lively chorus of descriptive expression. It had my senses and emotions right there in the park. I adore the use of the insects and animals that are associated with the tree's persona. A very unique piece. Beautiful
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much cybertron1986 for your lovely review and very generous stars, so very sincerely appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and nice poem about the poet tree. And nature does indeed help us to deliver poetry. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you used. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This is a very well written and nice poem about the poet tree. And nature does indeed help us to deliver poetry. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you used. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thanks Teri7 so much for your lovely review and stars that are truly appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Sarah B Tutun
I absolutely loved reading this fantastic poem. your rhyming use was genius. there are not enough nice words that I can say about this poem. thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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I absolutely loved reading this fantastic poem. your rhyming use was genius. there are not enough nice words that I can say about this poem. thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you sincerely Sarah, for your lovely review and generous stars so very sincerely appreciated! you made my day! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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you are welcome!
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Thanks so much Sarah, for your lovely review! you have made my day, bless you! Vance