Comment from
Patty Palmer
Good job on your poem! What imagination children do have and surprising that's maybe how some things are invented by an adult had a dream as a child!
God Bless!
Patty
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
Thank you for the review, I can only imagine what future gadgets tell will come up with.
Blessings for your Time to review it.
Comment from
C. Gale Burnett
A perfect 4-line, 1-5-5-9 syllable poem, and such very wise words. Thank you for the author notes explaining the different elements of the photo. You put so much thought into this, and I wish you the very best in the contest :)
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
Thank you for the review and compliments, refining writing by reviewing poems here, Bless you.