Reviews from
Fighting children
2 total reviews
Comment from
Debbie Pope
Well you certainly captured life with this one. And you managed to do it in 8 words, with two sets of rhymes. The photo is great for your post. Not only is it a picture of a yelling child, but the style of the art carries through your child theme. The artwork appears to be drawn by a child. Then you notice the cleaver and the naked lady which make the photo hilarious.
I think that I would call the poem "I'm Telling." That's a little catchier to me and every word counts in these short posts.
Good luck with this fun entry. Thanks for the smile.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
Thank you for your review and stars.
Comment from
Alcreator Litt Dear
This two line poem tells mommy's word of care and teaching word of warning to stop her child's yelling; well said, well done. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2019
As always, thanks for your review and stars.
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