Dark clouds Falling
Climate Change21 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
This has a grave warning about MothercEsrth. Thanks for creating this verse. The accompanying illustration is a wonderful companion.
My guess the font size diminishing from one line to the next was intentional.
Best wishes for your Lune entry.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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This has a grave warning about MothercEsrth. Thanks for creating this verse. The accompanying illustration is a wonderful companion.
My guess the font size diminishing from one line to the next was intentional.
Best wishes for your Lune entry.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes intentional, I am practising some different forms along with trying to use advanced editor, many thanks for your review****kahpot
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Well done, but I sure hope we come to our senses and stop feeding into the destruction of our planet and her resources. If we don't start now, it will not be a good place for our future generations indeed!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Well done, but I sure hope we come to our senses and stop feeding into the destruction of our planet and her resources. If we don't start now, it will not be a good place for our future generations indeed!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, I am sure it will not happen, that we will start helping soon, much appreciated****kahpot
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Most welcome, and I pray we do for their sakes :(
Comment from LisaMay
kahpot thinks man is kaput!
I agree; we are our own worst enemies and are on the slippery slope to extinction the way we are going. I like how you have the lines fading away as we disappear... hopefully not until after I have faded into my own darkness.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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kahpot thinks man is kaput!
I agree; we are our own worst enemies and are on the slippery slope to extinction the way we are going. I like how you have the lines fading away as we disappear... hopefully not until after I have faded into my own darkness.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much and nod not for many, many, years yet, I love the your greeting great humor, much appreciated****kahpot
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my pleasure indeed.
Comment from Ogden
Kahpot, I agree with what you mean, but I hope, if your prediction is right, it won't come true for at least a few billion years. By that time, probably everyone we care about will be gone anyway.
For now, good luck in the Lune poetry contest!
Don
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Kahpot, I agree with what you mean, but I hope, if your prediction is right, it won't come true for at least a few billion years. By that time, probably everyone we care about will be gone anyway.
For now, good luck in the Lune poetry contest!
Don
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes I hope so too, much appreciated****kahpot
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You're very welcome.
Don
Comment from Bichon
An ominous but very awesome poem. Unfortunately this turn of events may happen one day, who knows when, but it is possible. I really enjoyed this poem though, great work!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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An ominous but very awesome poem. Unfortunately this turn of events may happen one day, who knows when, but it is possible. I really enjoyed this poem though, great work!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Wow! Thank you very much, I think this is only my second try at this form, I am thrilled, very much appreciate your wonderful words and stars****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Dark Clouds Falling" is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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"Dark Clouds Falling" is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
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****kahpot, my pen-pushing friend, you're more than welcome.
God bless,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from Joan E.
Many thanks for your thought-provoking Lune and reminder about doing something to restore our world. Your artwork selection parallels the dark clouds perfectly. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Many thanks for your thought-provoking Lune and reminder about doing something to restore our world. Your artwork selection parallels the dark clouds perfectly. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for your very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
Fantastic Lune, kahpot. The truth always hurts yu know and mankind is digging his own grave, I am afraid. Your insight expressed in this poetry is well written and conveyed with your talent. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Fantastic Lune, kahpot. The truth always hurts yu know and mankind is digging his own grave, I am afraid. Your insight expressed in this poetry is well written and conveyed with your talent. : ) Bob
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thank you and I agree, mankind is not helping much at all, very much appreciated****kahpot
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: ) Bob
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: ) Bob
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaaack!! I am out of sixes, dag-nabbit!! ;) ;) This is so very cool on a number of levels, ma'am!! :) First, what an awesome pic... impact you have achieved! ;) ;) Then your font size change really catches the eye and makes the reader want to follow you 'down the rabbit hole' to read the whole thing!! ;) :) And both of those things just do wonders to enhance your message in your well-constructed Lune -- great job!! ;) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Aaaaack!! I am out of sixes, dag-nabbit!! ;) ;) This is so very cool on a number of levels, ma'am!! :) First, what an awesome pic... impact you have achieved! ;) ;) Then your font size change really catches the eye and makes the reader want to follow you 'down the rabbit hole' to read the whole thing!! ;) :) And both of those things just do wonders to enhance your message in your well-constructed Lune -- great job!! ;) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Many thanks, your encouraging and inspirational comments are worth more than any ol six, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like that you entered the contest. I like the simplicity of the Lune poetry. I like that the photo and poem takes us into the future of what the world appears in the darkness without man. Futuristic poetry so structure in this poetic style. Best regards for your contest entry.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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I like that you entered the contest. I like the simplicity of the Lune poetry. I like that the photo and poem takes us into the future of what the world appears in the darkness without man. Futuristic poetry so structure in this poetic style. Best regards for your contest entry.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your very encouraging review****kahpot