Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "The Root Cave Queen "Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
3 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a lovely poem, my friend. I am glad it has a happy ending and that their lives are blessed by having married. I enjoyed this one much~Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely poem, my friend. I am glad it has a happy ending and that their lives are blessed by having married. I enjoyed this one much~Debbie
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
Blessings to you for your time to read and review it.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a good rhyming poem and uses the aabb format very well. The cadence and good rhyme choices lead the reader through very well. I enjoyed reading this verse.
Melissa
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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This is a good rhyming poem and uses the aabb format very well. The cadence and good rhyme choices lead the reader through very well. I enjoyed reading this verse.
Melissa
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thank you for Your valuable time to read and review this poem offering. God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Mia Twysted
An interesting little piece. It was fun to read and very smooth. I enjoyed the way one line just fell into another so easily.
I was very delighted.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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An interesting little piece. It was fun to read and very smooth. I enjoyed the way one line just fell into another so easily.
I was very delighted.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your time to read and review this poem offering. Blessings to you.