Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Live and learn and learn Adam and Eve did. The hard way! It pays to listen before going off half cocked where as getting themselves in trouble.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019

God's Blessings to you for your time to read and review this poem offering.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A very strongly-voiced calling to get everyone's attention.... I would only suggest that the excessive capitalization actually tends to weaken your message because the reader misses any 'nuances' in your ardor because everything stands out -- and when everything stands out, nothing is special... :) Thanx for sharing such a cool, rhyming testimonial.. :)

Humanities Issues --> Humanity's Issues

Floods Ark Construction --> Flood's Ark Construction

Friends and Strangers Hearts --> Friends' and Strangers' Hearts

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019

Thank you for the review and corrections, I will correct the spelling shortly. One of the Notes explain the Capitalization's purpose.
Blessings!

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

You have presented some Biblical truths with this posting. It is well written. However, the small font size is a detraction because it is difficult to read. You might go back to edit it and enlarge the font. Just a suggestion. This is a powerful line: We Need our Souls to Search, Reason, Listen, and Find!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019

Thank you for the review and compliments.
I had written this originally in size 16 font, but in preview changed it, due to overlap of sentence appearance. Blessings.

reply by Janetsue on 23-Aug-2019

I understand completely. It is frustrating when we can't get something we are posting to look the way we want. Sigh.