Dreams of Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "From the Depths of my Mind"A word collage about my life.
2 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
You did wonders by expressing your self in the nonet with nine lines by telling us readers-
from the past brought that of how your subconscious thoughts brought forward how you had to fight your way to stay alive
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Hello author
You did wonders by expressing your self in the nonet with nine lines by telling us readers-
from the past brought that of how your subconscious thoughts brought forward how you had to fight your way to stay alive
Gert
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you ever so much. Your review and comments are greatly appreciated.
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Smile you are welcome unknown author
Comment from Cheryl I
I like your rhyming. "There are times pieces show through" is a great line. That happens to me, probably to all of us. I think you did a nice job on this.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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I like your rhyming. "There are times pieces show through" is a great line. That happens to me, probably to all of us. I think you did a nice job on this.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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I sincerely appreciate your review and comments; especially letting me know, in this case about the line you liked.