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An Afterthought of Pleasure

Remembering the feelings of love at our fineness hour.

8 total reviews 
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like this and the intense and passionate feelings and emotions that your well placed words express. You've set the scene and paint a picture for the readers to visualize. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thanks Jeffrey. I'm happy you see the picture that I painted. :) Glad you liked it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Ottava rima. When the actions were good the memories will be sweet and we can cherish it in our hearts for a long time.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thank you Sandra. Glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Ahhhhhh... the memories are there to spark the mind, but the body needs more rest instead! ;):) Smiles but truth... A wonderful offering that paints a lifetime picture with more yet to come!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thank you Yvette. This is part of life. Glad you liked it. :) ;)
Comment from Karl Speth
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The eyes have it, the flowers too. This is a good poem, by the power of you. In seriousness, this is good. Thank you very much. The flowers fit the poem too quite well.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thank you Karl. Sometimes the power fizzes out. :) Glad you liked it.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Ottava Rima contest.
You've managed the form nicely and your verse flows smoothly within.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thank you Sharon. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Love can certainly take its toll on us and a rest in between all that romancing is advisable. I thought your words gentle and spiritual entwined with much love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Dolly your words do wonders for me. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Jeswin Samuel Jose
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It is a nice poem.It gives an inside feeling of comfort and pleasure for the reader. It tells about the intense emotion of love. Love is the world's strongest emotion.It has the ability to change the life of a person. It cures illness of the heart. It brings enlightenment to the soul.This poem greatly describes the wonderful moments of love.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thank you Jeswin. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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I think your format is good, I didn't see any problems there. I like how you write romantically about what feels somewhat real. I love an honest approach to any poetry! Well done and good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thank you kiwigirl. Someday, you may not sleep, but enjoy the love of your life. :) I'm glad you liked it.