Dreams Come Alive
A nocturnal nonet.22 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Congrats on placing second in the nonet contest. This poem well deserves it. It gives a description of how beauty soothes and rests in the soul.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Congrats on placing second in the nonet contest. This poem well deserves it. It gives a description of how beauty soothes and rests in the soul.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 20-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from BeasPeas
Your nonet is nicely formed and illustrated. The first four lines are particularly well done, although all of your poem hits the mark. Best of luck in the contest. marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Your nonet is nicely formed and illustrated. The first four lines are particularly well done, although all of your poem hits the mark. Best of luck in the contest. marilyn
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from patcelaw
A very nice nonet for the contest. It flows well and it presented beautifully. Have a wonder filled day. God bless.
Patricia
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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A very nice nonet for the contest. It flows well and it presented beautifully. Have a wonder filled day. God bless.
Patricia
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for this nice review Patricia. Blessings to you. x
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful almost ethereal offering for the contest that draws the reader's attention deep within contemplation of dreams of our own! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;) Yvette
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What a wonderful almost ethereal offering for the contest that draws the reader's attention deep within contemplation of dreams of our own! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
Comment from w.j.debi
I like the positive message. You paint beautiful imagery. Excellent use of verbs: beckoning, unfurl, hanging, plummet, shimmer. Perfect syllable count. Perfect triangular form to your visual presentation.
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I like the positive message. You paint beautiful imagery. Excellent use of verbs: beckoning, unfurl, hanging, plummet, shimmer. Perfect syllable count. Perfect triangular form to your visual presentation.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully-written, vividly descriptive nonet makes excellent use of references to the nighttime sky to convey a message about our aspirations. Awesome artwork
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Your skillfully-written, vividly descriptive nonet makes excellent use of references to the nighttime sky to convey a message about our aspirations. Awesome artwork
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Dreams Become Real, has the proper nine-to-one descending syllable formatting and forms a beautiful shape that matches the twinkling stars. Nice.
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This nonet, Dreams Become Real, has the proper nine-to-one descending syllable formatting and forms a beautiful shape that matches the twinkling stars. Nice.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is something spiritual about this write Lisa, a tranquil and peaceful self indulgent nonet sparkling with shimmering magic, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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There is something spiritual about this write Lisa, a tranquil and peaceful self indulgent nonet sparkling with shimmering magic, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
Comment from poetwatch
Thank you LisaMay, for bring back the beauty of your voice. Take a break from your wild ride with them boyfriends. I love to read your feelings, not those that have a desire to be number one boyfriend. Whoever challenged you to write 50 words shorties must have seen how you dance in your poetic form. More poetry please. :) This is a very good entry for the Nonet Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you LisaMay, for bring back the beauty of your voice. Take a break from your wild ride with them boyfriends. I love to read your feelings, not those that have a desire to be number one boyfriend. Whoever challenged you to write 50 words shorties must have seen how you dance in your poetic form. More poetry please. :) This is a very good entry for the Nonet Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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You are such a wonderfully uplifting reviewer of my poetry. Thank you so much for this terrific review.
It'll soon be over with all those animals, then your wish is my command.
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! I have enjoyed reading this poem. No grammatical errors. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! I have enjoyed reading this poem. No grammatical errors. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2019