Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "My Sisters "Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
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Comment from Jennifer trotter
the wrighting is good, it just didnt catch me much in the story, if it was shorter, then maybe i would nof enjoyed it more. it was more of a run on poem. telling a short story in a long way
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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the wrighting is good, it just didnt catch me much in the story, if it was shorter, then maybe i would nof enjoyed it more. it was more of a run on poem. telling a short story in a long way
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your time to review and comment.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. One thought I had is not to type in script or use a bigger font. That way the poem would be easier to read.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. One thought I had is not to type in script or use a bigger font. That way the poem would be easier to read.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the review and comments, I've found that using the bigger font actually makes the longer stanza poems unreadable.
I'll consider changing the font type. Thanks again, Merry Christmas