Comment from K Dono

Excellent

This is super sweet. It's heart to get feelings into restricted syllable poems, but you managed! It's light and cute, perfect for Valentine's day! Good luck!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thanks for your kind review, I?m glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the 15 syllables competition, and I hope it will do well. I found the illustration most unusual, never having seen such forms of fireworks. It matches perfectly the text that is a good tribute to love. The only part I didn't like was the title. I think Iwould have tried to put love in it as well as celebration.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Thanks for your kind review, and suggestion. The picture was my impetus to write, because it was a different show of fireworks.
Hugs, Trisha

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Thanks for your kind review, and suggestion. The picture was my impetus to write, because it was a different show of fireworks.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dancemom

Excellent

This is a well-written poem for the 15 syllable poem contest. Your syllable count is correct. I like how you compared love to the igniting of fireworks. Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Thanks, I appreciated your positive review
Hugs, Trisha

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Thanks, I appreciated your positive review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Trish, This is a very beautiful and very well written 15 syllable poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020

I appreciate your lovely review,
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Teri7 on 03-Feb-2020

you are so welcome my friend. love and blessings, Teri

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a well-written poem. You send a strong message using very few words. It lets the reader feel the love, the bond you have for your mate. The artwork is perfect for your poem.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Thank you very much for your kind review

Comment from phill doran

Good

Hello there
This is a good idea, but I think you need to look at the execution: you are one syllable short and appear to have ended perhaps a word short too?
I would also have a look at line two where you have a space issue in the text "...foryou..." i.e. there's a space needed.
(I know it is a personal preference, but maybe "...bursts..." should be with a lower case 'b'? - Just a suggestion).
I wish you well with this. From the title, I think that I can see where you are going, but you need to just tidy up the presentation a bit, to make it work.
Cheers
phill

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Hi phyl, how kind of you to want to help. Truth is, I hit the wrong button, and the poem got released. There was no way to disable it. I would never purposely release such an inadequate poem. Your generosity was much appreciated with 4 stars.
Hugs, Trisha