Quiet and Still
poem ending with quiet contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
I love this poem. The way the last word of a line begins the next. I didn't need the photo prompt because the imagery was so well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I love this poem. The way the last word of a line begins the next. I didn't need the photo prompt because the imagery was so well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Dear Cindy, Thanks for your exceptional rating. I like the loop poem style. Thank you for your compliments and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Ricky1024
"Quite and Still"
Is a Quiet writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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"Quite and Still"
Is a Quiet writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Dear Ricky, Thank you for your compliments, comments and good luck wishes.
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My pleasure.
Ricky
Comment from moongirlwriter
Ohhhhh, I do like this one. You've done an excellent job of not only ending on the word quiet but written within another kind of poetry of ending with one word and then staring the next line with the same word. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Ohhhhh, I do like this one. You've done an excellent job of not only ending on the word quiet but written within another kind of poetry of ending with one word and then staring the next line with the same word. Nicely done.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Dear moongirlwriter, Thank you for your compliments and review.
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:)