The Music Plays On
Glad she said yes so many years ago.2 total reviews
Comment from Puzzle
Awe I love this. There aren't many pieces that are about life long commitment. Most are about lust or new love. This is easy to read and short and simple. I liked it a lot.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Awe I love this. There aren't many pieces that are about life long commitment. Most are about lust or new love. This is easy to read and short and simple. I liked it a lot.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thanks again for the six stars.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Simply sweet. Lots of predicable words but you redeem the poem from triteness with the unexpected--and alliterative--music that we make; by twisting the word order and preceding it with the word love vs the usual we make music together. Glad she said yes too--excellent closer! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Simply sweet. Lots of predicable words but you redeem the poem from triteness with the unexpected--and alliterative--music that we make; by twisting the word order and preceding it with the word love vs the usual we make music together. Glad she said yes too--excellent closer! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thanks for the read and comments. I will try not to be so trite next time. It is interesting that I received six stars from another reviewer. Just goes to show every one interprets work differently.