Poetic Treasures & Dreams
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned about what is going on in your mind. It makes me so sad, because I know how that feels as I have been there. It took Jesus helping me and getting mind on the right track. You are in my prayers my friend! love, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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This is a very well written poem you have penned about what is going on in your mind. It makes me so sad, because I know how that feels as I have been there. It took Jesus helping me and getting mind on the right track. You are in my prayers my friend! love, Teri
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Teri, thank you for your empathy and your compliment and review. You too are always in my prayers! Love, Donna
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May God bless you my friend!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Fibonacci spiral poem about our thoughts that can sometimes go wandering until we have the answer to our questions the words roll and mingle through our mind.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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A very well-written Fibonacci spiral poem about our thoughts that can sometimes go wandering until we have the answer to our questions the words roll and mingle through our mind.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have mentioned your state of mind having wandering thoughts for sometimes, you try hard but things or matters go something beyond your grip or control, nothing goes straight; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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You have mentioned your state of mind having wandering thoughts for sometimes, you try hard but things or matters go something beyond your grip or control, nothing goes straight; well said, well done.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very expressive, vividly creative piece. Through a blend of literal and figurative language--metaphors and similes--you have conveyed a powerful message about the frustration of racing thoughts.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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This is a very expressive, vividly creative piece. Through a blend of literal and figurative language--metaphors and similes--you have conveyed a powerful message about the frustration of racing thoughts.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Dear Janice,Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Cindy Decker
I like the shape of your poem! It must have taken a lot of work to get the shape right, and to get a very serious message across. I think this way sometimes. I like how all your words enhance the atmosphere of your poem. The photo illustrates just how complex the mind really is. Excellent work. Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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I like the shape of your poem! It must have taken a lot of work to get the shape right, and to get a very serious message across. I think this way sometimes. I like how all your words enhance the atmosphere of your poem. The photo illustrates just how complex the mind really is. Excellent work. Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Dear Cindy, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Drew Delaney
This style of poetry I have seen a few times, but I have not attempted it. I am thinking that the poet is concerned of the future with the virus and all its peculiarities. We are all in the same boat. We will get through this. Hang in there! Nicely written!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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This style of poetry I have seen a few times, but I have not attempted it. I am thinking that the poet is concerned of the future with the virus and all its peculiarities. We are all in the same boat. We will get through this. Hang in there! Nicely written!
Drew xx
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Dear Drew, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Very complimentary artwork. I'm not sure what to say, other than it your poem looks good on paper. I felt like the poem's flow was chaotic and a bit forced. There was no rhyming either which I missed. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Very complimentary artwork. I'm not sure what to say, other than it your poem looks good on paper. I felt like the poem's flow was chaotic and a bit forced. There was no rhyming either which I missed. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Dear Lance, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove