Lost Myself
Losing your own self.4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I like your allusion. **Spoiler** in the end they actually were ghosts. This a good metaphor. Eckhart Tolle would say our identity is lost until we get in touch with the spiritual part of ourselves. So maybe becoming aware of ourselve as lost will be the first step to finding the deeper part of ourselves. This is a good topic for discussion within us or among us.
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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I like your allusion. **Spoiler** in the end they actually were ghosts. This a good metaphor. Eckhart Tolle would say our identity is lost until we get in touch with the spiritual part of ourselves. So maybe becoming aware of ourselve as lost will be the first step to finding the deeper part of ourselves. This is a good topic for discussion within us or among us.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A lonely offering from a pen that's been isolated too long -- get skype and get connected! ;) :) An awesome offering for the contest today, anon -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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A lonely offering from a pen that's been isolated too long -- get skype and get connected! ;) :) An awesome offering for the contest today, anon -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you! I hope that I win. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Comment from Puzzle
Well this little poem is quite powerful. I do feel this poem though. I've lost myself before and it's incredibly hard to find yourself again. The layout of this is as powerful as the poem itself. Good job
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Well this little poem is quite powerful. I do feel this poem though. I've lost myself before and it's incredibly hard to find yourself again. The layout of this is as powerful as the poem itself. Good job
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from January L'Angelle
Everyone feels lost at some point in their life. I wonder if ghosts exist and if they have identities. I mean, are they still the people's identity that they were when they were alive? If that were the case, you'd have to say something like "I feel like a blob" LOL. I'm just joking with you! I love this poem... It get's a 5 from me... it's awesome. -January L. PS I hope you have a good sense of humor... Mystery Writer.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Everyone feels lost at some point in their life. I wonder if ghosts exist and if they have identities. I mean, are they still the people's identity that they were when they were alive? If that were the case, you'd have to say something like "I feel like a blob" LOL. I'm just joking with you! I love this poem... It get's a 5 from me... it's awesome. -January L. PS I hope you have a good sense of humor... Mystery Writer.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you! I do have a sense of humor. It is funny what you say I'm a blob. Humorous. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)