Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Add Ministry "Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
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Comment from Phillip Smeal
It is fun to play with words. I would hesitate to call this rhyming, and I don't know that the long words used are all appropriately fitted in terms of meaning, though they sound okay. I feel that I may have been too harsh in the marks department, but compared to that song about the modern major general, this feels under done.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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It is fun to play with words. I would hesitate to call this rhyming, and I don't know that the long words used are all appropriately fitted in terms of meaning, though they sound okay. I feel that I may have been too harsh in the marks department, but compared to that song about the modern major general, this feels under done.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the remarks and time.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A new intake on our words of house :"What's been Missing Deals with a Little more Humility!
Realize Sharing of our Walks Help all Psychologically,
Opens our Mind's Third Eye warming Cold Soul's to other Strategies?
To Serve those in Need and Helps our Healing - Add Ministry! " Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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A new intake on our words of house :"What's been Missing Deals with a Little more Humility!
Realize Sharing of our Walks Help all Psychologically,
Opens our Mind's Third Eye warming Cold Soul's to other Strategies?
To Serve those in Need and Helps our Healing - Add Ministry! " Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your Review and Positive Encouragement. Blessing.