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You Color My World

A tetravalent for the rainbow contest

8 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This rainbow poem, You Color My World, is well-worded to intertwine the rainbow metaphor with a person who has brought color back into a washed-out existence. Nice.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Joan E.
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What a dazzling, rainbow-colored butterfly artwork you selected! I enjoyed your display of what love can create, along with your similes and rhymes. Keep soaring! And best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
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Well this is nicely constructed. It includes a rainbow at the end, I wouldn't say this about a rainbow, but that's splitting hairs. This is well crafted, the rhyme scheme is smooth throughout.

A strong contest entry.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thanks fur sharing your insights- I did make a small revision.
Comment from roof35
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This is a lovely tribute to a love and a rainbow. The illustration, of course, is beautiful and pairs perfectly with your words. This is very nicely done.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend

A fine entry for the A Rainbow writing prompt contest. It flows well and it caught my attention. Beautiful presentation.

Your poem reminds me of a song by Cat Stevens, first cut is the deepest.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you for dropping by. So glad you enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you for dropping by. So glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from zanya
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A lovely lead- in to the re-discovery of joy following some difficult times along life's journey - clouds part and peace returns - color is re-established

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you for reading and sharing your insights!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is a very skillfully-written, vividly descriptive, exuberant piece. It conveys a lovely message about the power of love to give a person a new
lease on life.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much for reading and sharing your insights.
Comment from Earl Corp
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You picked a great picture to accompany your poem. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and touched the reader emotionally. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much for reading and sharing your insights.